Jason Everett Miller

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So long & thanks for the....

I got a super strong Douglas Adams vibe from this story. The voice was crystal clear and consistent, though I would keep an eye on the asides and adverbs. A tiny bit of both goes a long way, but even a dash too much makes life much harder on the reader. Other than that small criticism, I found this to be a solidly-crafted short story by a writer with some chops. Well done!

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