Jaye Marie

petersfield

determined to do at least one good thing before I die...

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my review for "12"

The first chapter is extremely tense, almost painfully so and the premise has been done before. Should be interesting to see how the story progresses, and if the tension stays as full on!

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my review of Escape

This story grabbed me from the first page. Brimming with intrigue and tension, I think it reads well.
There were a few annoying points in the punctuation and paragraph layouts that would be improved with another edit. But if the ending is as good as the beginning, Escape should do well!

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The Ghost of Helena

The description made me choose to read this book and I quickly read the first two chapters. Instead of being a new reading experience, I felt as though I was revisiting an old friend. Well written and plotted, I will enjoy reading the rest of this book.

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