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Good

Good story! Strong female lead. The message, we are not bound by our circumstances.

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Good

Good, loved the plot. Author is a very talented story teller.

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Another Hit!

Another great story!! Amazing writting skills... sci fi romance. Glued to it from beginning to end! Thank you!!

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Absolutely loved it!!

A story like no other! Wild, raw, thrilling, emotional, tender, romantic, exciting, wonderful! Second book I've read from this author, The Barbarian was amazing, now this one blew my mind! Thank you!!

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6 Stars!

Awesome! Love the story line, the characters came to live, the description of the narrative was perfect, not too little, not too much, just perfect! The writer wrapped me around her finger and I just followed like a child through the journey that was this book. Recommend it 100% what a gem!

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Good story

A cursed Princess, a damaged king, and a whole bunch of other chars make this story very entertaining!

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Good- Supernatural

Good Supernatural story! The plot is different. Lucy meets Warewolf kinda vibe. Strong (badass) female char. I couldn't put it down!

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Good-

A journey of redemption or a journey of destruction. Two forces collide, will they help each other recover their humanity, or destroy themselves in the process. Thrilling, violent, emotional... Is there hope for these two? Can't wait to find out.

Story is not edited, the errors don't necessarily distract the reading flow.

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Good

Gut wrenching, emotional, thrilling, romantic, really good!

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Good! Awesome different

Awesome different plot to supernaturals! I can't wait to read more!

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Very good!

Very good short stories!

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Good, funny, touching

So far so good! Well written, touching, funny, and promising love story. Looking forward to more!

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Beautiful Mermaid Story!

Loved it! Feel good story, happy extended endings!

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Good!

Oh so good! The Umbrella Academy, meets Sherlock Holms, meets Alfred Hitchcock, meet X-Men!! This story is so good!!!

Two writers, a very well story of fantasy, mystery, friendship, and trust. Characters are very distinct to each other, their development is smooth.

The plot is very well planned out, and the book hit its intended goal, keep the reader wondering til the very end!!

Totally satisfied! I would look forward to more adventures from this bunch!!

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Very good - Once Byten

Very good! drama, thriller, tech, Spec Ops, obsessed, possessive, strong FL - Very good read, characters are pretty well developed, plot and delivery of story enthralling. 100% recommend.

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Very Good-Blackwell Rising

As alway this author does not disappoint! Very good, accurate, even educational BDSM story, about time someone de-demonize this fetish. I also appreciate the awareness to sexual abuse and victims of sexual crimes. Anyway, very good story, I can't wait to read more!

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Good! Deadly Betrothed

Excellent read, I already knew I would enjoy your stories from the little taste I got from Uncaged.

A very well told story of a modern day girl thrown into a life completely different from what she was used to. She had to learn to submit, and obey in a patriarchal culture in order to protect many innocent lives that depended on her, against her own judgement she found herself falling in love with the person she least expected.

I wish there was a sequel, want to learn more about their stories, more about the brothers, Roisin, and their children as they become leaders. ❤️❤️

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Good - Mystic Lake

Good read!

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Good! - A Bit On The Side

Folk Novel telling the ups and downs of living in Igbo, Nigeria. The writer's story telling is very good, the description of events, the inclusion of expressions native to the Igbo make this Folk novel a delight to read, it fully immerses you into the story. Two chapters have captivated my interest. A good read!

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Good - The Lost Princess

Very good storytelling! Good plot, good character development, good fantasy, good romance, good thriller, and good twists and turns!

Problem? I wanted more. I find that with stories that are so good, in the end I sometimes feel I was expecting more, more chapters, more details on some of the side stories etc... however that does not make the story bad, or less in any way.

Very good read!

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Good! - Enslaved by the King -

What an experience! Author kept us at the edge of our seats through the whole story, we hated, hated, loved, hated, loved, hated, loved, loved, and then kept us wanting more though the whole thing.

The Author gave us a love story deeply affected by prejudice, ignorance, abuse, and fear - two characters with flaws, one selfless by nature, severely traumatized, and with low self esteem, the other possessive by nature, entitled by rank, and bitter by betrayal. These two, tangled in a web of misunderstandings, and misconception, hurt each other deeply because of their immense love for one another. The storytelling didn't disappoint, and the personalities reflected their flaws perfectly.

My only complaint is that the end seemed abrupt, too many things were coming up, and then it was summarized into one chapter. It does give closure, however it also leaves you wanting more details on how their life finally came together.

Excellent read!

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Very Good!

Very good storytelling! Loved the plot, the setting, the characters! ❤️❤️❤️

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Good!

Awesome sequel Alpha Ethan, Alpha Xander is just as good!

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Good

Very good! Good char development, smooth transitions of events. Romance, strong female lead, strong male lead, good side characters, action, thrills. Overall story well written! Now to sequel!

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Good

Very good story. Strong female char with a lot of baggage, fittingly the God of love helped her open her heart and find her true self. Well done!

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Love it!

Story still ongoing, however I feel confident enough to give a rating - so far the story is refreshing, is sexy, and it's romantic, there is more than lust in the development of the relationship. Strong female character is always a plus. Love every one of the characters so far!

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Not Romance

This story is NOT romance in any way. Is a story that should be tagged as drama, dark, gritty, fantasy, violence, trauma, etc. however NOT romance! Stories wrongly labeled can be traumatic for the readers. The story is good, the writing is good, overall is good, but is not labeled correctly. I can't give it any points because of that. Some of us try to stay away from certain genre, being sucked into them by tricks like this is unforgivable in my book.

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Absolute 5-Star! Eternity

Book 1 - "Forevermore", Book 2- "Eternity".

I decided to write a review even though the story is still ongoing. The story is meticulous, the author mix of history and fiction blends in smoothly creating a story we are familiar with, then we indulge with revelations of secrets only Vladimir can disclose.

This is not a cliché Dracula romance, and far from any vampire romance either. The author's story shows a man who was driven away from his humanity in a thirst for revenge, power and his twisted views of what is right and wrong. It's the story of a tortured soul, and his quest to redeem himself for the one love he lost centuries ago, and thinks he has found again. The road to redemption is not easy, nor his intended love accepts him easily.

Within all the horror the story is romantic, and does express the struggle we all go through as we try to redeem ourselves from our pasts.

Awesome books!

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Good but..

The story is good, but incomplete, unless there is a second book I am unaware of. Bella's powers are an unfinished story. Needs major editing, a lot of grammatical errors; wrong words, wrong verb conjugation, wrong syntax, etc, however the story is readable. Recommend it.

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Good short read

Good short story!

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Awesome!

This story is exactly how I imagine vampires. The author is a very good story teller! Character development is smooth and as they "grow" so do we readers as we slowly begin to understand the intricacies of the characters. Excellent!

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Had potential then...

The plot was great, I was intrigued, excited and the suspense was killing me, I was loving it, and then it ended.. it just ended with a huge cliffhanger.. and there is no sequel? I recommend it though, let others experience the same. Author, you had a good thing going there...Why did you stop?

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Really good!

Great sequels! The story keeps you excited, twists and turns, you do need to read in order, maybe even re-visit some earlier versions, little details that seemed unimportant come into play later on. Very good story telling!

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Awesome!

Loved this 3rd book! Good twists and plots, cute Victoria! Likeable characters! Love, love!

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So good!

Great 2nd book! Can't wait to read the 3rd!

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Very good!

Original vampiric plot.. twists and turn.. good!

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very good story!

Loved the story! A few spelling/grammar errors, however they are not too distracting. The plot was well planned, characters developed smoothly. 100% recommend!

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Awesome!

Reviewing before completion, because I am positively sure the rest will be as satisfying! Recommend it 100%

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Good

Very good book 1, a serious cliffhanger ending.

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Good

Very entertaining, twists and turns galore!

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Good with a few buts..

This is a very good story.. but it seemed rushed. Good story line.. but at one point towards the end I lost the connection to it. Could use some rewriting on later episodes.. I recommend the story anyway.

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Good

Another beautifully told story. Read all her books, each original and very much satisfying!

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Good

Loved the story, disliked the heroine. Wish story told us a bit more of how the love developed.. talented author!

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Good x10

Impressed. Excellent BDSM storytelling.

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Good

loved it. Very well written!

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Good

Very good! Thank you for not adding unnecessary twists and turns. Enjoyed it thoroughly!

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Good!

Well done! Recommend 100%.

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Love it!

Loved it! Absolutely satisfied! It only needs grammar and spelling editing to hit jackpot! Strong female lead!

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Good

Liked it, however.. some issues following story timeline.. characters other than main couples were confusing, left many questions unanswered. Left me confused. Story plot is good, main couple are super cute, action, drama, romance and very good erotic parts. Recommend 100%.

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Good

Good read. liked the plot. recommend it.

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Romance Noir?

If you are not captivated by first chapter, then this may not be the novel for you. Different, dark, deep, not a love story, not a romance genre, but at the same time you feel the heartbreak, you feel the emotions, you feel the love. It's a mental fuck, if you know what I mean.

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Gem!

emotional. real. heartwarming. heartbreaking. all in one person's perspectives, so a lot of things unexplained just like real life. recommend 100%

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Disappointed.

I liked the plot. I was eager to see the character's developed then an abrupt ending that left me empty. Main female character was frustrating. I kept reading with the promise from author that FL was developing, it didn't happen, then came the end with so many open questions. The author has potential, however seems she lost interest in the end. Can't recommend it.

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Good! all in one book!

Loved it all, storyline, flow, characters, good read overall!

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very good

I liked the story, recommend it as a good read!

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Good

The story is good overall. Characters other than the main character are a little two dimensional, but one enjoys the read anyway.

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Excellent !

Finished both books, wrote review on the second already - this story is captivating, can't find another word to describe it... it's so that I still miss Thora. I recommend this one hundred percent! There are not many books where I miss the protagonist and the story so much.

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Good II

Book 2 down, 12 more to go! Very good storyline, love how characters are developing, can't wait to start next book!

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Very good

Couldn't put it down 😘😘😘

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Captivating

The Daughter of fire series is very good, I found it original, very well written, and had my total attention.

I only wish that there were updates to book 2, I wish to reach an ending to the story, craving it.

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Wonderful!

I don't tend to write many reviews, however when I come across gems like this one, it is impossible not to write one.

This story has taken us from the first book "Daughter of War' to the second "War of Queens" smoothly.

The story overall is refreshingly original, the plot is well constructed and well delivered. The writing style is excellent, it has kept my attention from the moment I started reading. It has taken me on an emotional roller-coaster ride, and I loved every minute of it!

I recommend this to everyone!

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Good!

Great story line, characters development is good, kept me interested from begging to end. Can't wait to read next 13 books!

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