jenniferawilliams2

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Interesting Read

I do not normally read things this...violent I guess the word would be. The plot is interesting. The writing itself, in my opinion seems kinda forced? It's a bit jarring and takes me out of the book. That being said, it definitely wasn't bad. Albeit a bit confusing. It could turn into something quite good with the right amount of editing.

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Devoured immediately!

I absolutely loved this. Now, this isn't the normal sort of book I read. I am more of a fantasy/romance reader but I found myself drawn into the book. I could picture the events taking place in my mind. A few misspellings but, overall, an excellent quality read. I'm going back now to read more.

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It isn't awful

It definitely isn't the WORST thing I've ever read. That being said, it doesn't grab my attention. There are some grammer issues. The plot is interesting. The story itself just needs further development.

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