Jennifer Kane Martin

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GREAT for my students!

Aqueela is definitely a character I could see high school students relate to! The relationship between Bells and the protagonist is classic. I would suggest varying sentence structure from time to time. Remember...show, don't tell.

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Accurate

I am a high school teacher, and the dialogue and inner thoughts are PERFECT. However, the lack of capitalization, punctuation, and the typos are distracting. Don't let these get in the way of a potentially good story.

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