Jennifer Renee Hunsicker

Springfield

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Amazing read!

I found this story by just browsing around, but I've always been a fan of Avalon stories. I love your writing style, I find myself relating to the characters. I find myself wanting to read it more the next day. I just couldn't stop laughing when you referred to his manhood as the "Partner in crime" that's great and hilariously at the same time. I can't wait to see if you have more books after this one. I would buy this! I did notice a few spelling issues, but that happens i'm sure some light editing would probably fix that.

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Can't wait to read more!

I love the way this is written. I'm thrilled to read more about this and i hope there are also pictures of the characters! I really felt like i was a part of this story while reading it, never let that go! It's a good quality to have while writing.

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Amazing story

I love the alien twist on this fantasy story. It makes me want to read more and more with everything I read. I love the writers use of foreshadowing. i think the only thing that is lacking with the story is maybe a little bit more details. For example, what the characters actually look like or more details about the rooms they find themselves in. Thanks and keep writing Megan! I can't wait to see more! <3

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