Jesse Hargrove

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I admire your willingness to tackle such taboo subject matter. I tried to give specific feedback in my chapter comments. The beginning of the book felt like an information dump about the characters where I would've liked a little more time spent developing them organically. That being said, once the story got going, it really got going. The fast pacing made it easy to follow and made me want to keep reading on.

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