Jesse Hargrove

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Loving it this far!

You've done an excellent job setting up the story and I'm very interested to see where you take it. The intensity between Cammie and Greyson's relationship is almost palpable.

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An epic samurai tale

If I could rate this story higher, I would. It's always such a treat when an author writes characters in such a way that you feel connected to them. The plot is rich and well paced, so much so that I had a hard time finding a good place to stop. I loved the incorporation of the spiritual realm and this story had a good mixture of both Eastern and Western conceptualizations of such places. There were a few minor grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing so drastic that it took me out of the moment. All in all, this is a fabulous story that I will not hesitate to recommend to any and all who love fantasy/adventure!

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Sinister

I admire your willingness to tackle such taboo subject matter. I tried to give specific feedback in my chapter comments. The beginning of the book felt like an information dump about the characters where I would've liked a little more time spent developing them organically. That being said, once the story got going, it really got going. The fast pacing made it easy to follow and made me want to keep reading on.

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