Jessica

Slow updates due to studies. Apologies in advance.

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Nice

There's some nice word play you have going on in your poems. Personally, I find your poems to be a little too long to read (except The Setting Sun), hence the four stars (in writing style and overall).

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Makes you want to read more

Good beginning - makes you asks a lot of question in a good way.

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Love this story

I love this story a lot. Keeps me reading as every chapter intrigues me. Although there are some spelling and grammatical errors (only slight). I'd give it 4.5/5 stars (overall) if I could.

Keep going :)

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Love it

This book was a good read. No loopholes, book gives answers to every question that could be possibly asked by the reader. Written in a beautiful way.

Story was original and refreshing to read. If anyone stumbles upon this book, I would highly recommend reading it. Was worth the time.

I would've liked to read something about Jules and Jake at the end, but I'm satisfied with the ending either way.

Thank you for creating this piece :)

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I like it.

I liked this poem a lot. Well done :)

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Needs some work

The plot is interesting and has potential. You should add some dialogue and background information and history to make chapters more lengthy and more interesting to read. (although, it was already interesting to begin with). Also some grammatical errors are present.

What are Grimley motives and thoughts? You should clarify them in the first chapter to add more depth to the character. Does he want to be a knight? Why does he want to be one? Just a few questions to think about..

I actually like the narrative voice you give Grimley, which comes from the way you write. I applaud you for that.

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Good

Has a refreshing take on a romance story. There's a few grammatical errors in your book and I'll assist you in correcting them. LOVE your vocab.

Well done.

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Keep going

Poem wasn't too bad, and it's rough to make a review solely on one poem. Keep going though

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Very good

Interesting story, I hope you keep going :)

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Has potential.

Poems are unique, but you should try use some imagery and not explain what the poems mean as this will heighten the meaning of your poems :)

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Solid

Pretty good so far, keep it up :)

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