Jessica Denisa Suian

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Interesting!

It’s a really good book and the plot is good too. The story feel a little to rushed and like there something mission in the plot, for example when Joshua or any other character talks to someone else it feels like it’s detached from emotions or there is not enough description of the emotions of the characters.

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Interesting!

I find the plot really interesting as I never read anything close to this and it’s interesting to see the difference from the other stories. There is a few grammar mistakes but not a lot.

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I love it!

I really like the story because it’s different from all the other one but I feel like she should be a little scared of strangers in a way after been in a mental hospital and just breaking out of there but at the same time it makes sense why she’s not scared of kade. There are a few grammar mistakes but other that that it’s a really good story.

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Amazing!

I love this book. It one of the best books I ever read and I know that I would love to read it again too which is something for me because I don’t like reading books twice. There are so small grammar errors but it’s a great story.

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Interesting!

I like the story because it was a really interesting plot but I think that the story could of been split into 3 other stories as well. But at the same time I understand why you chose to put them together.

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Amazing!

I really like the story and how it’s written but I think the story could of been split into like 3 different stories so that the reader would get confused who is talking and who the story is about.

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Amazing!

I love the story! It so funny and has a really interesting plot that I never read before which makes it really great. I really hope that the main characters stay together and not brake up, I would be sad if that happened.

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I really like it!

I really like the story because it feels like your in the story too. There are a few mistakes that make it hard to read it. Like unfinished sentences and time frames, but other that the story in great.

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I like it!

I really like it. It’s really interesting that the main characters don’t know from the start that their brother/sister are together and that they never met officially as that. I also like how Theo, from the moment he saw her felt a connection to her and she feels the same way even though she doesn’t know the first time he saw her. I’m getting a little confused with the time frame of the story like at what time he came to her house after her sister left and other moments too. But other than that it’s a great story that got me hooked from the first chapter.

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Amazing!

I love this book because it feels so real and like your in the story yourself and your watching all of this unfold before your eyes. I’m favorite part was the kiss in the dark. It’s one of my favorite book and one of the best plots too.

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Interesting!

I like the story, it’s really good and it’s interesting also because you can sense that something is going to happen and that things will not go too smoothly.

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Interesting!

I love this book and I can’t wait to see what will happen next. Alpha Deacon is one of my favorite books and I love that it has a sequel so I know what happens in the future.

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Amazing!

I love this book. It one of the best books I have read until now. I couldn’t stop reading it and I would stay awake until really late to read it. You are such a good writer. There was some parts though where I found that you where repeating a line of words more than one but other that that it was amazing.

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Interesting!

I really like the plot and I really want to know what will happen next, and who is the mystery caller but there is grammar mistakes that make it a little hard to read.

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Really good!

I like the story a lot but it seems a little rushed and like things aren’t adding up with the characters and how long they new each other I feel like they need to know each other a little longer before this all happens are put the kiss between Lucas and Airlia, her being the last one to get her stone, at the end.

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Awesome!

I love the characters and the plot. They are really good the plot catches your attention so intensely that you can’t stop reading until you get to the end. You should definitely continue this book and finish it. I would really love to continue reading it. My favorite character is Lele because she’s really strong, stubborn and curious about everything that happens around her but that’s what makes her such a great female character in this book. There is grammar and spelling mistakes but it’s not bad with some re writing the book will be incredible.

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It’s really nice!

I really like the poems/short stories but there is a few things that I don’t understand and the grammar needs to be a little improved. I’m not saying this to make you stop I do really like them it’s just I’m sure that if you improve a little it will be more incredible.

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I really like it!

I really like the new plot of the story the the other plot was nice as well. I think that the other plot would make a great story too.

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Amazing!

I really like Alexandra’s character but I don’t like really like Nico’s character but it would be cool if Nico would find his mate soon and she would be a werewolf/ alpha’s daughter/ Alpha and when he meets her me gets his wolf and then he wouldn’t want the article to be published anymore. I would recommend this book to all my friends that have Wattpad and like to read. I choose this rate in because this is what I think.

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