John Kilkelly

Philadelphia PA

John Kilkelly is the author of The Phoedrus Elevator and the upcoming story The Lament of the Iceman. He enjoys Guinness and meat pies and long walks on the beach..

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The technorunner

HI, you have the baseline for a good story! My only feedback: do a find/replace on 'Technorunner" and use the pronoun "he" in most instances. I'm not sure why you should do this, it just feels better and improves the flow. Good luck!

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