Jennifer Harrington

Dallas, TX

The books I publish here are for testing and learning purposes for me. It's trial and error and that's all this is. Such is life.

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interesting

so while i was reading i liked the whole concept of the story although a little more detailed in the beginning why he was being chased to be captured would be helpful. i felt like i had to jump all over the place to be able to piece things together. also what does Magnus look like? that was my only struggle. now for the good stuff. you've got a great novel in the works and i do want to see the outcome of your magnus character. keep writing, proof read (believe me i struggle with it too!) and produce more chapters and more books!

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very intriguing

this story definitely has me wanting more, i liked how it all came together. keep writing, you have a good talent

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interesting

i actually got a kick out of this, im planning to read the rest of it because i found Pattrick to be funny and the character names fit the story. so loved it so far. my only advice with writing is work on spelling. cuz and because make a difference. but i really loved it.

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