JL Neill

Colorado

I live in the beautiful state of Colorado with my husband of twenty-five years and three of my five children.

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Also a lot of grammatical errors

Horrible misuses of the words "done" and "seen." And I also agree with the vast number of punctuation errors.

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Fantastic Love Story

What a great story! The characters were well-written, and the plot was exciting and romantic. It was not like Mr. Lafayette's other stories, but it was a welcome change from his Doms and Dommes series.

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Good Plot, Poor Grammar

I liked the plot of this story, but the grammatical and punctuation errors made it hard to read. Also, some of the word choices were incorrect. For instance, the author uses the word 'perfectly' too often and often in error. All in all, though, it was a good story.

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Grand Novel Top 10%

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