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Loved it!

I love the story. The relationship between Joseph and Persephone is cute. The love and care that they have for each other is so sweet. Their babies will have a great life because they're surrounded by people who will love and cherish them. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job.

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Wow!

This was a great read. It was definitely a little hard to wrap my head around the transaction between Zara's 'parents' and Aidan in the beginning but you did warn us. In a society where's there's oppression your characters showed different methods of working to end it. Some conformed out of fear and the fact they had no choice yet some tried to stand up against it. I see some of the characters as symbols of the past and future. Zara's parents represent the past and throughout all that she's been through, her new upbringing has made her someone who won't take oppression. Both her and Aidan serve as the future where there's a means to putting an end to the oppression. Definitely didn't expect to find werewolves in the story so pretty cool surprise.

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Loved it!

From beginning to end, I was captivated by this story. Emma is a lovely child and the adventures that she went on were fun. I can't believe that its finished. I love the fact that she escaped the negativity from the beginning and now she's happier than ever. She stayed true to herself even with her bully and now the so called 'Freak' is having the time of her life with her new family who loves her dearly. Great job!

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Very interesting!

It takes a lot of skills to create a world that will captivate readers. That is what you've done. I love the world and characters that you've created. Saffire is very intriguing and I can't wait to see how she grows. I want to see her get stronger and more confident in her abilities. I don't know what you have in store but I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job! Also, crossing my fingers for Coburn x Saffire. Great job!

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Interesting!

I am intrigued by the main characters. They've both been through so much that you'd think it'd be hard for them to love again yet that's not the case. It's cute and dark all in one. I'm interested to see how everything will play out but so far, it's a pretty good concept and the story flows well.

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