John A. Mutka

Valparaiso, Indiana

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A Visitor in the Woodland

Story unwinds slowly, gradually building suspense, then really takes off.

I was impressed by BK's effort.

Lots of subtle fright power that should appeal to teenagers , but is too sophisticated for younger readers.

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What bothers me is how oblivious Clayton's parents seem to be about the threatening presence.

As for the cop I don't understand his attitude.

Milton seems to treat the horrifying viper in a rather cavalier fashion.

Is he having fun at Clayton's expense?

Or does he believe in the legend?

Hard to say.

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