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Fantasy Island

An unusual story line..hmmm..The making of a Dragon Hybrid..and the different types or species of Dragons; Fire, Water, Earth, Thunder even..As always, greed, evil and skulduggery comes into play..Hooray Good triumps over Evil..Some of the Dragon hybrids were not mentioned after the invasion, Jace, Samantha and such, presume that they died...I would read a sequel to this story..Good work by the Author..Did not get maudling, overly sentimental...KufosπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Tear Jerking...Poignant

It was a long read but...profitable...The Author carried this Reader through a gamut of emotions. It was poignant, painful, tearjerking and REAL..Life isnt a bed of roses& even if it was...Roses have thorns and their petals die and fall to the ground after giving of their fragnance and beauty..Jenny was one such; her life permeated other lives with beauty, joy, chill in the early stages and then at the end, lasting memories..Reading this a day after losing a very good friend, classmate and coworker, it struck a paralell in my mind re the impact my friend Neil had on his family and friends...A void left that can never be filled by any other..😒😭πŸ˜₯ The Author can take a bow; this book capture the essence of a life journey that was well travelledπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Just Woweee!!

Can this Author write or whattt?? Mercy...Page Turning, Sitting On The Edge Of Your Seat, In The Moment, Gut Churning, Suspense Filled, Realistic WRITING....I am now an Addict To This Author's Writing...Keep It Coming Baby...Cant wait for my FIX....Almost like Food, Scrumptious
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Life.... Twists And Turns

A page turner, fast paced, most of the loose ends tied together nicely...However..dear Author ..kindly tell us who framed Walt and why??..We know from the end of the story that they were caught and how it was done but...the who and the why would make a great sequel...Loved Hal's fiery end..so fitting with all the other villans meeting such demise..death then cremation Forest Fire style...Hooray for the Good guy Team...A great read...except for the small aforementioned mystery which started Walt's story...Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Does It Again.....

The Author has sure hand in writing about families...A deft touch, not maudling, mushy sentimentality but geniune tearjerking writing...Love both books of the Series thus far...The Author was able to combine both stories and tie up a lot of loose ends...Had enough twists and turns for the story not to get boring...KudosπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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War is BRUTAL

War brings out the best and ...the very worst in people. Survival depends on more mental than physical toughness..War brings losses ...and gains, but mainly losses..Loss of friends, family and even oneself...But like a Phoenix rising from the Flames, self is renewed, regained but...invariably changed...A brutal, fast paced, realistic storyline..Shock, Awe and Horror....
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’₯πŸ’₯

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Second Time Around...Better Than The First Time😘😍

Second Chance At Love....Love at any age is a Blessing..But can be a thorny path, filled with Bliss & Blisters..The Author didnt go overboard but kept the storyline believeable...All's well that ends wellπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Tear Jerker..Life Is A Lesson

Life is hard..and then you die. This Reader is paranoid about relationships. This story just reinforced it. The people who hurt you the most and the hardest are the ones who are closest; your Family. Their betrayal can, if you let it take you to a place of deep Depression and Bitterness so far down that you need a hand holding a rope to pull you up and out..What happened to Mina, Kent , Camille , Kyle and the girls is devastating on so many levels. All due to the selfishness and lack of self control that Kris exhibited..Sighhh
Well written, true to life, tear jerker plot line..I could easily see this as a Life time Movie..Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Love Conquers All...Slain Indeed

Men need love and understanding just as much if not more than women...The storyline is tight, fast paced, gritty and realistic...This Reader would love sequels with Jen, Mark, Sam and especially Drew
The Author needs a proof reader to check for correct words and spelling though, otherwise the story is compelling, a good read..Sex scenes are πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

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The Sandman Cometh

The story is fast paced..needs a couple of sequels to complete the picture..What happens to Ron, his mother Marge, Andrew, Brenda and Cougar..Overall a decent read..πŸ‘

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A Gripping Tale...Life Is Rough

There is a song that says..." I have never met a Man without sorrow; never looked into eyes with no pain"....Stone, the Lycan has been there, done that and have the scars to show..Losing his parents early, then his first Soulmate and Firstborn..its a wonder he is not bitter and broken.He is cautious, not willing to rock the boat, unwilling to expose himself to more pain..naturally...
Author, it was a fantasy of mine to wonder what it would feel like to live for at 500 years but...I have changed my mind. This story shows that it will not be all Peaches & Cream or Beautiful Roses( but then Roses come with thorns)..but the loss of loved ones along the way would negate the joy of longevity..A very good read; waiting for the finale with bated breath..😊😊

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Not Sure Where This Is GoingπŸ€·β€β™€οΈπŸ€·β€β™€οΈ

The plot line seems good but...the story is disjointed, the flow from one update to the other is not smooth. It is as if some pages are missing..The Author would do well with a Reviewer befire posting..The premise of the story is unclear...losing this Reader...At this point of the story, some of the loose ends should have been "knotted" even if not fully tied up....Story is all over the place, no nexus; so this Reader is unable to find a common thread running through...Author, please, please review..I can sense the making of a good story but...its getting lost in posting...SighhhπŸ€·β€β™€οΈπŸ˜£πŸ˜«

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Life .....Happens

Life happens...This story is eerie, thought provoking..The Author spins a tale that makes one wonder; could this be how persons have been brainwashed and used as spies against their own people..hmmm boggles the mind, doesnt it...πŸ€”πŸ€”
Waiting with bated breath for next instalment and the finale of this story...Also see the potential for additional sequels relating to Sam and Alex..Good reading...

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Broken Hearts Can Be Mended

New and Different...The Merpeople story is not usually explored..The Author plots a good story, could easily see it being translated as a story along Religious or Racial lines..Galia and Weston getting to know each other, finding out each other likes and dislikes in terms of preferred food and lifestyle makes for laughter and fun...Bardo and his obssession leaves a bit of a cliffhanger...Need a Sequel to tie up loose ends...Glad that Weston and Monica were reconciled...All in all a good story, one that can be read more than once..Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Tagged And Bagged...NOT !!!

Full of suspense, drama, nerveracking, nailbiting, page turning, slow paced Intrigue...
So you Mr DA, think your usual bags of tricks can tie this one with a biw, signed, sealed and deliveried huh...Hahaha not so fast...And the LawFirm, callous, calculating and cold...its all about the money...Mr Patel, now there is a tought nut, fighting against the tide, going against the grain, ( cliched, yes I know)...A good read..Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Finds A Way

When you lose hope, everything is lost...This Author is the Master of weaving loose ends together to make a believable story..The journey of Royce and Claire was at one and the same time , fast paced but also a gradual lead up to seduction. Could also be seen as a long drawn out Foreplay that culminates in a lot of sexual activity...This Reader also liked the otherwordly, mystical help from Jen..Good goingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The Town Where Hope Lives

A modern day Exodus..movement of people...Not so idealized to be unbelieveable, but offering a sense that Utopia is possible..It reminds the Reader of the story of Pitcairn Island...A question to the Author though, what happened to Beverley and her childrenπŸ€” Overall a great storyline..never grew boring, well crafted, page turner..Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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We Need A RevolutionπŸ’£πŸ’₯πŸ’£

Sometimes humans go overboard when seeking a solution to a problem. Overprotection led to imprisonment, fear, hate and exploitation. Restoring the natural balance is never easy thus the need for a Revolution.It starts with the thoughts, motives and then action. War inevitably brings losses but in the end, the changes are worth it...Well written, has a lot of twists in the plot line but all the loose ends are tied together by the end of the Narrative..This Reader would like to see more of this Author's work..Well doneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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FrienEnemy..Watch Out😣😣

Not everyone who claims to be a friend is one..While Blake is not a "moral" man; he is a Mafia Boss after all, but he is more loveable than the female Protagonist..Adultery with the help; thats one of the oldest game in the book. Caleb is a viper, seductive, sinister and insincere, he got what was coming to him. The storyline is believable and confirms my basic life belief; Be careful of your Enemies but be even more careful of your Friends; they are the ones who know your weakness. Paranoid I know but...it is what it isπŸ˜πŸ™„

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Life Bites....

Unexepectedly Enthralling..and I mean that in all its connotations...Racism, Specieism..haha.Scarlett's word..This really brings out the saying" The Enemy of My Enemy is My Friend"...A fitting end for Rowland..that old fart..An unanswered question though.." Was Oscar really starting his own Nest or was he acting under orders from RowlandπŸ€”..didnt quite figure that out...Nonetheless a great Read. The Author writes a fast paced, page turning or in this case chapter turning story...I love the Heroine, Scarlett..she still has honor and retains remnants of her humanity despite being over a thousand years old...Nick had some hard lessons to learn about life; that its not all Black & White..there is a greater amount of Grey..in a lot of ways Scarlette is far more humane and well thinking than he is..Hopefully this experience and the exposure will make him become well rounded and make better decisions...Love Lillian, greatest Bestie ever, Amir is also a great character, very open, willing to learn and believe..All in all, well rounded characters...Great Read Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love In Excess

Neat Story line...Very restrained in the sexual activities department...leaves a little to one's imagination..very refreshing..Love the twists and turns of the plot..Wanted to know how Cindy and Sadie died though..
A good read..The Author can expect more attention from this reader...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Transcends Death

This story reminds me in some ways of Queen Victoria and her Consort, Prince Albert..She loved him and though they had a short marriage and he died early, Queen Victoria was able to go on ruling after his death for over fifty years. Sad though that the Heroine, Charlotte did not get a child with Trevor to have that connection with him...Good Story line the Author held it together and even managed to infuse a bit of surprise near the end..Queen Isabella's motive for disliking our Heroine..Queen Heather is typical of a lot of mothers-in-law; needing to run their children's lives and influence their choices...then behaving like children when they dont get their way...A good read..Would love to see the Author's other worksπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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You Can Live Again

The Lunas went through a fiery, painfilled, heartrending crucible..It consumed some of them mentally, emotionally and finally physically ending in death. But for the remnant, it allowed them to build strong bonds, rise up like Phoenixes after their fiery birth and soar. The Author penned a fast paced story filled with pathos, pain, guilt, horror, redemption and recovery. The story could easily be translated using purely human characters as I am sure some of the scenes enacted in this story can be found in history, even modern happenings..Think of Rwanda, Cambodia, Uganda, Yugoslavia and the aftermath of civil war in these countries and match the scenario with what happened to the Lunas and their people..An enthralling readπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Signed, Sealed..Deliveried

Gripping, thought provoking, too realistic for comfort..As an ardent fan of forensic shows, true crimes; this story gives another part of the picture.The documentaries mainly focus on the murderer and the victim/s...But this story focuses and gives an insight in the minds of the victim's family; the after effects of the crime namely despair, guilt, alcoholism, divorce suicide..But what redeems the book and gives a sense of purpose, is when the family moves beyond all that and take action. In some cases, pressure groups are formed; for examples Moms Against Drunk Driving MADD but in this case, revenge is planned and executed flawlessly with the aid of interested parties who want to right a wrong and see justice done...This book is also a sad and telling commentary of the corruption that underscores many of these Human Rights organizations and persons involved in them; no rights for victims and their families, no true regard for law, order,decency and natural justice..All in all, a very potent bookπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Broken, Bonded, Beloved

Fast paced, realistic..Story shows that sometimes your worst enemies are members of your own household..Times of joy and times of sorrow, just like in real life...The Author needs to get a proofreader or review the chapters before posting...A good story can be spoilt by poor grammar or incorrect words used..Plot development is good, believable and ends well...πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Ironman Bends; Breaks But Doesnt Rust

The Author keeps the storyline moving, weaving the previous books and the lives of the other Riders into a seamless Tapestry...then adds another thread so that the Reader is lured to follow.Cant wait to read Vince and Tor's stories....Good reading, keep the stories flowingπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Intense, Fighting Fit...

The Author keeps the narrative real...the storyline is tight, consistent, loose ends are tied in this story...Funny though, the invading Drug Runner isnt given a name or an identity, as if he is just a pawn needed to fulfill the plot line....Good read..πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Fight As You Might, Love Always Wins

The Author must either be a part of the subculture of Bikers and MMA or..she has great researching skills and information. She transported this Reader to the actual fight scenes, actually hear the noise of the crowd, feel the hits suffered by the fighters, smell the blood and taste the fear and excitement of all the participants. The dark side of the fight, flight and fucking relationship is exposed..Taken altogether, this book featuring Vik, Lysandra, Daniel and the Riders is intense, gripping, heartrending from the get go...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Repairs, Release ....Roar

The story line is believable...There is wickedness and depravity in the world..There is pain, hurt, bitterness but there is also healing, restoration and release..Broken peices can be glued together not to the original vessel but to something different, unique and special..Rage and Iris prove this but Wood and Tammie add realism to the mix.....Who would have thought that you could a situation that once brought pain andvmake into something that brings pleasure and healing to both parties...Good going Author you incorporate the stories so well..πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Heartwrenching Well Told Story

Well written..could not put it down until the story was finished, a real page turner..Author has a great understanding of PTSD; its effect on families..also of human nature, both good and bad..Would read another of the Author's books..πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Full of Rhetoric

Polarised, Racist...Black & White no Gray Areas...Life is not like that..I cant decide if the Author is writing a Parody or overstating the Story to get people to think but...
Not all black people think or behave the way the story is written..Is it a Caricature..Cause its surely not a good story..Question for the Author..Have you read "Atlas Shrugged" by Ayn Rand..You should if you havent already done so...Same one dimensional outlook on Life...SadπŸ™„πŸ˜
Story is thought provoking..somewhat repulsive though....

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