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Second Time Around...Better Than The First Time😘😍

Second Chance At Love....Love at any age is a Blessing..But can be a thorny path, filled with Bliss & Blisters..The Author didnt go overboard but kept the storyline believeable...All's well that ends wellπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Maid ( Made) For The Alpha

Good story, great plotline
However, the spelling is not so great(grate)
That is an example of the spelling error;
Others are worriers instead of Warriors, dear instead of Dare
balled instead of Bald( that one threw me for a minute) when it was used to describe the vampire Marco, it sent my mind in a whole different direction
Dylan deserved to die, as all Traitors do; a more selfish, self serving character I have yet to read aboutπŸ‘πŸ‘
My heart aches for Michael; is there no way the Author can bring him BACK into the storyπŸ˜ͺ😭😒
Oh well, I am waiting with bated breath for the rest of the story

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Wonder Wolf Amy

Well plotted, storyline tight, fastpaced
Amy and Jake are special, so are Jason and Emily
Sophia and Blake are sweet
I can see the Author getting more material for additional stories; Spinoffs or Sequels
It came to satisfactory end, most of the loose ends were tied up

Btw why did the Pluminiri not like magical beings
Would make a great back story
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Long Journey To Happiness

Through dark days and hard times, Aliz and Callum triumphed
Right won over Evil, that always makes for a good plot and story
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ™Œ

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Fantasy Island

An unusual story line..hmmm..The making of a Dragon Hybrid..and the different types or species of Dragons; Fire, Water, Earth, Thunder even..As always, greed, evil and skulduggery comes into play..Hooray Good triumps over Evil..Some of the Dragon hybrids were not mentioned after the invasion, Jace, Samantha and such, presume that they died...I would read a sequel to this story..Good work by the Author..Did not get maudling, overly sentimental...KufosπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Tear Jerking...Poignant

It was a long read but...profitable...The Author carried this Reader through a gamut of emotions. It was poignant, painful, tearjerking and REAL..Life isnt a bed of roses& even if it was...Roses have thorns and their petals die and fall to the ground after giving of their fragnance and beauty..Jenny was one such; her life permeated other lives with beauty, joy, chill in the early stages and then at the end, lasting memories..Reading this a day after losing a very good friend, classmate and coworker, it struck a paralell in my mind re the impact my friend Neil had on his family and friends...A void left that can never be filled by any other..😒😭πŸ˜₯ The Author can take a bow; this book capture the essence of a life journey that was well travelledπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Just Woweee!!

Can this Author write or whattt?? Mercy...Page Turning, Sitting On The Edge Of Your Seat, In The Moment, Gut Churning, Suspense Filled, Realistic WRITING....I am now an Addict To This Author's Writing...Keep It Coming Baby...Cant wait for my FIX....Almost like Food, Scrumptious
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Life.... Twists And Turns

A page turner, fast paced, most of the loose ends tied together nicely...However..dear Author ..kindly tell us who framed Walt and why??..We know from the end of the story that they were caught and how it was done but...the who and the why would make a great sequel...Loved Hal's fiery end..so fitting with all the other villans meeting such demise..death then cremation Forest Fire style...Hooray for the Good guy Team...A great read...except for the small aforementioned mystery which started Walt's story...Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Does It Again.....

The Author has sure hand in writing about families...A deft touch, not maudling, mushy sentimentality but geniune tearjerking writing...Love both books of the Series thus far...The Author was able to combine both stories and tie up a lot of loose ends...Had enough twists and turns for the story not to get boring...KudosπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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War is BRUTAL

War brings out the best and ...the very worst in people. Survival depends on more mental than physical toughness..War brings losses ...and gains, but mainly losses..Loss of friends, family and even oneself...But like a Phoenix rising from the Flames, self is renewed, regained but...invariably changed...A brutal, fast paced, realistic storyline..Shock, Awe and Horror....
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’₯πŸ’₯

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Tear Jerker..Life Is A Lesson

Life is hard..and then you die. This Reader is paranoid about relationships. This story just reinforced it. The people who hurt you the most and the hardest are the ones who are closest; your Family. Their betrayal can, if you let it take you to a place of deep Depression and Bitterness so far down that you need a hand holding a rope to pull you up and out..What happened to Mina, Kent , Camille , Kyle and the girls is devastating on so many levels. All due to the selfishness and lack of self control that Kris exhibited..Sighhh
Well written, true to life, tear jerker plot line..I could easily see this as a Life time Movie..Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Love Conquers All...Slain Indeed

Men need love and understanding just as much if not more than women...The storyline is tight, fast paced, gritty and realistic...This Reader would love sequels with Jen, Mark, Sam and especially Drew
The Author needs a proof reader to check for correct words and spelling though, otherwise the story is compelling, a good read..Sex scenes are πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

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The Lion & His Lady

I hope writing is a catharic experience for you.
This story was fast paced, sexy without being smutty, sentimental without being sappy.
A great read..Keep writing, will keep reading

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HeartWarming..MuchπŸ˜πŸ€—

Lets be Friends first, then Lovers
Its starts with one Hello
Love is where you find it, it just comes and makes you weak
Yeah, those sentiments are part of songs that ran through my mind while reading this stiry..
Good Job, Elle, well doneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life Changes

Hot, Hot, HotπŸ”₯πŸ”₯
Has a good story line along with awesome sex scenes..It tells of growth, development, forgiveness and Love
Good Job, Author, cant wait to read more of your WritingsπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life Changes But Stays The Same

There's a thin line between the natural and the supernatural...Love transcends all boundaries
Loose ends were tied, questions were answered and the Adventure continues...

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Rock Steady, Rock Daddy✊

Life is a journey; it doesnt always move in a straight line..The beauty of Life is the Power of Choice
When you decide to make changes and you choose to do so, Miracles can & will happen..
Story line is believeabke
Good job AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life & Its Vagaries

The story line was real..No Fairy Tale but.. its feels good to have a happy ending
The name of the story " Patience" matches the plot
Well worth reading...
Kudos to the Author

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Journey of Life

A well written, fast paced story
Well worth the Reader's time and attention
Decisions, decisions, results and consequences
This Author will go far

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Detectives...OhAh

Move over Hardy Boys and Nancy Drew, Corey Baker and Michelle Pritchard are in town!!
I know mentioning Hardy Boys & Nancy Drew as well as the Bobsey Twins will betray my age...🀭😎
However, these two teenagers show the same amount of luck(good or bad, you decideπŸ€·πŸΎβ€β™€οΈ) in getting embroiled in mysteries...
Great job, Author, well doneπŸ‘πŸ‘
Looking forward to ther stories from you..

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Megan's Choice

My, my, Author, arent you one for twists and turns, plots and counterplotsπŸ˜‰πŸ€”
The ending was unpredictable; oxymoronic to say the least
Loose ends tied, yet..still left the Reader cliff hanging
Good job, AuthorπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life Changes..

The plot was well knitted, sensitive
The Author handled the different subjects; mixed families, death, grief, loss and love with a deft touch..
Tearjerking, poignant, moving but also true to life
Well worth reading
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Go Out FightingπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ

The story is fast paced, plot believeable, if somewhat futuristic
AlthoughπŸ€” hmm, the way Technology is moving nowadays, Devon's submarine and his AI, BESS are not too farfetched..
A fitting end to Domminic and Asante; at the height of their power, they were taken down..
I hope they lose Cortez in the deepest, darkest Prison cell they can find; I hate moles & Trojan horses
I hope that Devon finds love again, may be with Becca, hmm, seems possible
I know grief can make people mad & sad but... Sarah's mother is an Awful woman. Am so glad Devon had Abby & Glen as good friends
Great Job, Author Jim, looking forward to many other works from youπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The Heart Knows What The Heart Needs

Intense, from the start to the end.
Trying to fit in; even it makes you sick..
Finding love when you were not even searching
" Love Always Finds A Way"
Well done AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘
Looking forward to more of your work😌

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A Hard Road To Love

This was a rough ride on the journey to Love
Mistakes were made, problems caused and solved
Olivia, the mainstay of the story, learned to blossom, that there is more to Life than Work
She faltered a bit but, in the end, things worked out
Wesley Alderman redeemed himself, was used to women just dropping into his lap, usually poor choices. But at the risk of losing Olivia, he matured, becoming a worthwhile Husband & Father candidate.

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Love Emancipated

Story started out violently. Looking through 21st century eyes, it smacked of rape, human rights violation, slavery, imprisonment and seemed headed to a painfilled conclusion.
However, the story was redeemed by Adam's acceptance of his love for Mahala; to the point where he was willing to fight for her, to give up his homeland and move to a different country where he could freely express his love for her.
John seemed to be typical of his time, unwilling to look past the barrier of colour and race; it cost him
Adam's friendship and earned him a good, well deserved thrashingπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
Good story line, somewhat believeable
Good job AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life & Its Vagaries....

Good plot line, well crafted story
All loose ends tied in the end
Losses were sustained but...thats the human condition, both good & bad
Astrid is strong; physically and mentally
Reid's growth from a callow, idealistic youth to a seasoned warrior, loving spouse is well worth reading about
The usual motley crew of villians and heroes are present, but at the end, good triumphs over evil which always make a great reading experience
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Always Finds A Way

Very restrained story but..not without its highs and lows..Love really finds a way if both party are willing to work for it.. Pete and Cristina are boy and girl in adult bodies but still clinging to High School childish behaivor..Smh
Love the family setting, the pathos, the grief and then the joy and peace...
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Oh The Twists & Turns Of Fortune

Partwolf, I am an avid fan, having read quite a few of your books..But this; this one blew me away
Talk of plot twists and turns
Awesome stuff...By the way, I beg of thee, do not consider me an enemy, I wouldnt be able to survive
You are particularly, positively Machiavellian ( hopefully spelt it right) with the plots and counter plots in this story... Renee & Robert are awesome Alphas and Joe is a wonderful, fearless,llving, loyal, sexyπŸ˜‰ mate.. And first in all my reading of the Werewolf genre, have I seen a Werecat & Werefolf offspring, Linda is sheer poetry in motion; potent, poignant stuff
Ten thumbs up..Partwolf..Great job, good reading experienceπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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What A RollerCoaster Ride

Partwolf...you did it again
Kept us on the edge of our seats
Tightly knitted story line, with a plot that twisted and turned, never allowing the Reader to complacently expect the next chapter
Then finishing with a bang...Just Woww
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Life Continues😏

A truly wonderful sequel...Loving the characters, very real depictions
The Caribbean talk seems a bit dated but adds authencity to the story line..
Good job, Islandkari

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Life Happennings

When I saw the page numbers; 1133, I was tempted to read the first part and then skip to the last few chapters..But the Author did not give me that option
She took us on a journey, a road trip, a train ride.Sometimes that the pace was slow but in other places, the scenes were so fast paced that you had to stop, digest what you just read and go on to the next chapter
Woww, talk about a rush
Normally, when reviewing a book, I would highlight points about the main characters but, if I started, I would be writing a small novella..So all I will say is READ IT FOR YOURSELF..It is one of the saved books that I plan read over more than once
Good job IslandkariπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The Begining Of The End

The Author has crafted a tantalising series...Actually started in the middle with Marrock and his mission to kill Drake, then included Emma, Hawke, Anne and others within the mix...
This last sory however, gives an insight as to why Mark Elder is so eagerly set on killing Vlad Dracula
Please update, the loose ends need to be tiedπŸ‘

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A Rose By Any Other Name

Love will find its way even when the situaion seems illogical. Rose and Jude prove this
As usual, there has to be a fly in the ointment or perfume, Bethany is a stinker
Pyschotic much...
Hope the Author writes on Hunter and Ace
Good story, fadt paced, page turnerπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life, Complex, Complicated, Confusing Life

Life happens
The decisions we make today have far reaching implications for tomorrow
This novel was an insight inside the military man's lifestyle, his motivations, his ups & downs
Sorry about Drake, Carlos mistake with Kaylee was his chance. He raised Joseph to be a fine man,great father figure
Carlos took awhile to get his act together but with the Marines being his life and Logan being his main love, most of his choices are understandable
Victoria has her own demons to struggle with, a absentee husband, a dominant father figure, she too finds happiness in the end
Logan & Joseph are good boys, sons and friends
Kaylee, ahhh Kaylee, loving, forgiving, very giving needed those two years after Drake's death to settle her mind
Looking forward to seeing more of this Author's workπŸ€—πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life Changes

Sometimes we love unwisely
Whenever one person carries most of the load in a relationship, the potential for abuse is high
Lita was very stubborn, even with all the evidence staring her in the face, she continue to cling to a dying marriage. Umaata will always be who he is; spolied, self-indulgent, living off his looks and women until...one day he will wake up and wonder where the years have gone, what has he achieved
Of course by then, it will be too late
Glad Lita found someone worthy to be loved, the insight on Vincent was very poignant; his parents, siblings and wife dying in the same accident could have destroyed him. Am glad he was the one who made the first move in solidifying the relationship
Good read, story line believable
However Author please edit, several chapters are repeated, that spoils the reading experience

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Projecting Into The Future

This story is beautiful...
Despite the setting, girl meets Aliens, travelling with Aliens ; there is a real sense of authenticity surronding it
The feelings that Connie gets when moving through Hyperspace(throwing up), the three of them Connie, Bob & Billy becoming friends then a family caring for each other
The other story lines running concurrently and merging with the meeting of Connie & Raylon
The real emotions shown by all the persons, really makes the story
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ™ŒπŸ€—

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Nice Twist On The Medevial TailπŸ˜‰

Scintilating, page turning, lovely change of pace
Prose was on pointeπŸ˜‰
Good conquers evil in medevial style, done in a refreshing way
Nice
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Always Finds A Way

This story is a page turner.Dont start reading unless you have time to read it to the end
The Author gets you hooked on the story from the get go, the characters are believable
And the very best part is that, love finds a way to defeat the odds
I am a fan of stories that have the good guys coming out the winners and this fulfilled my expectations
Wanted Timothy to die but..sometimes death is not the best revenge...All in all, a great read, would recommended it to otjets
Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Always Finds A Way

Short, sweet & spicyπŸ”₯
I wondered why Xavier didnt ask the Ultima to change Serena into a Werewolf instead of leaving the island of Paphos but..it worked out in the end
Kudos to Author, all loose ends tied up nicely by the end of the story

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Love Redeems😍😘

Sophie is a sweet feisty, determined loving and lovely person..Lindsey and Harrison are kooky, but real. Pete is honest, loving and loyal ( relationship with Reid and his dilema with Sophie) bear this out. Thank God, Lance and Tod proved redeemable, once given the chance, they turned their life around..Bill is what we in Jamaica call " a Waste Man" πŸ€¦β€β™‚οΈπŸ€¦β€β™‚οΈ Had every opportunity in life, but was just plain bad mind and evil,irredeemable..Psychopath, Jerk, Crook etc etc
Loved the story line, a page turner
Would read more of this Author's workπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Did It

A great read, pageturner, fastpaced with a satisfying conclusion
Daniel, Chrissy and Franko ended up where they belonged, in Prison
The Author needs to proofread the story before publishing, got a bit mixed up with the names substituting one for another
Also dont depend on Spellcheck, it will supply words which are not necessarily what the Author wants to convey, for example " Conscious" instead of " Conscience"
Overall, good storyline, plot well knitted and believableπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Devlin Takes A Dive

A wellwritten piece, not the typical Regency tale
One criticism, the repitition of the two chapters 10 & 15. The storyline was tight, evenly paced and came to a fitting climax
Sorry that the fate of Ensign Thomas and Lord Fence was not highlighted
Overall, a good read..would like to read more from the Author

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Jetsam & Flotsam..Found At Sea

Erica was floating along, no purpose or direction
Drifting along like a piece of wood tossed into the sea
Casey became the lodestar that centred her and gave her life some meaning
As some of the other commentators mentiined, the lovemaking scenes were pretty tame but it didnt detract too much from the storyline
The Author actually gave the houses in the story more description; the ones they found while searching for Henry
Btw, what happened to the lecherous sailor, the one that leered at Erica, wanted to hear how he ended up
Overall, a neat little story

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A Gripping Tale...Life Is Rough

There is a song that says..." I have never met a Man without sorrow; never looked into eyes with no pain"....Stone, the Lycan has been there, done that and have the scars to show..Losing his parents early, then his first Soulmate and Firstborn..its a wonder he is not bitter and broken.He is cautious, not willing to rock the boat, unwilling to expose himself to more pain..naturally...
Author, it was a fantasy of mine to wonder what it would feel like to live for at 500 years but...I have changed my mind. This story shows that it will not be all Peaches & Cream or Beautiful Roses( but then Roses come with thorns)..but the loss of loved ones along the way would negate the joy of longevity..A very good read; waiting for the finale with bated breath..😊😊

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Not Sure Where This Is GoingπŸ€·β€β™€οΈπŸ€·β€β™€οΈ

The plot line seems good but...the story is disjointed, the flow from one update to the other is not smooth. It is as if some pages are missing..The Author would do well with a Reviewer befire posting..The premise of the story is unclear...losing this Reader...At this point of the story, some of the loose ends should have been "knotted" even if not fully tied up....Story is all over the place, no nexus; so this Reader is unable to find a common thread running through...Author, please, please review..I can sense the making of a good story but...its getting lost in posting...SighhhπŸ€·β€β™€οΈπŸ˜£πŸ˜«

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Tagged And Bagged...NOT !!!

Full of suspense, drama, nerveracking, nailbiting, page turning, slow paced Intrigue...
So you Mr DA, think your usual bags of tricks can tie this one with a biw, signed, sealed and deliveried huh...Hahaha not so fast...And the LawFirm, callous, calculating and cold...its all about the money...Mr Patel, now there is a tought nut, fighting against the tide, going against the grain, ( cliched, yes I know)...A good read..Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Finds A Way

When you lose hope, everything is lost...This Author is the Master of weaving loose ends together to make a believable story..The journey of Royce and Claire was at one and the same time , fast paced but also a gradual lead up to seduction. Could also be seen as a long drawn out Foreplay that culminates in a lot of sexual activity...This Reader also liked the otherwordly, mystical help from Jen..Good goingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The Town Where Hope Lives

A modern day Exodus..movement of people...Not so idealized to be unbelieveable, but offering a sense that Utopia is possible..It reminds the Reader of the story of Pitcairn Island...A question to the Author though, what happened to Beverley and her childrenπŸ€” Overall a great storyline..never grew boring, well crafted, page turner..Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life Bites....

Unexepectedly Enthralling..and I mean that in all its connotations...Racism, Specieism..haha.Scarlett's word..This really brings out the saying" The Enemy of My Enemy is My Friend"...A fitting end for Rowland..that old fart..An unanswered question though.." Was Oscar really starting his own Nest or was he acting under orders from RowlandπŸ€”..didnt quite figure that out...Nonetheless a great Read. The Author writes a fast paced, page turning or in this case chapter turning story...I love the Heroine, Scarlett..she still has honor and retains remnants of her humanity despite being over a thousand years old...Nick had some hard lessons to learn about life; that its not all Black & White..there is a greater amount of Grey..in a lot of ways Scarlette is far more humane and well thinking than he is..Hopefully this experience and the exposure will make him become well rounded and make better decisions...Love Lillian, greatest Bestie ever, Amir is also a great character, very open, willing to learn and believe..All in all, well rounded characters...Great Read Kudos to the AuthorπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love In Excess

Neat Story line...Very restrained in the sexual activities department...leaves a little to one's imagination..very refreshing..Love the twists and turns of the plot..Wanted to know how Cindy and Sadie died though..
A good read..The Author can expect more attention from this reader...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Love Transcends Death

This story reminds me in some ways of Queen Victoria and her Consort, Prince Albert..She loved him and though they had a short marriage and he died early, Queen Victoria was able to go on ruling after his death for over fifty years. Sad though that the Heroine, Charlotte did not get a child with Trevor to have that connection with him...Good Story line the Author held it together and even managed to infuse a bit of surprise near the end..Queen Isabella's motive for disliking our Heroine..Queen Heather is typical of a lot of mothers-in-law; needing to run their children's lives and influence their choices...then behaving like children when they dont get their way...A good read..Would love to see the Author's other worksπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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You Can Live Again

The Lunas went through a fiery, painfilled, heartrending crucible..It consumed some of them mentally, emotionally and finally physically ending in death. But for the remnant, it allowed them to build strong bonds, rise up like Phoenixes after their fiery birth and soar. The Author penned a fast paced story filled with pathos, pain, guilt, horror, redemption and recovery. The story could easily be translated using purely human characters as I am sure some of the scenes enacted in this story can be found in history, even modern happenings..Think of Rwanda, Cambodia, Uganda, Yugoslavia and the aftermath of civil war in these countries and match the scenario with what happened to the Lunas and their people..An enthralling readπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Signed, Sealed..Deliveried

Gripping, thought provoking, too realistic for comfort..As an ardent fan of forensic shows, true crimes; this story gives another part of the picture.The documentaries mainly focus on the murderer and the victim/s...But this story focuses and gives an insight in the minds of the victim's family; the after effects of the crime namely despair, guilt, alcoholism, divorce suicide..But what redeems the book and gives a sense of purpose, is when the family moves beyond all that and take action. In some cases, pressure groups are formed; for examples Moms Against Drunk Driving MADD but in this case, revenge is planned and executed flawlessly with the aid of interested parties who want to right a wrong and see justice done...This book is also a sad and telling commentary of the corruption that underscores many of these Human Rights organizations and persons involved in them; no rights for victims and their families, no true regard for law, order,decency and natural justice..All in all, a very potent bookπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Broken, Bonded, Beloved

Fast paced, realistic..Story shows that sometimes your worst enemies are members of your own household..Times of joy and times of sorrow, just like in real life...The Author needs to get a proofreader or review the chapters before posting...A good story can be spoilt by poor grammar or incorrect words used..Plot development is good, believable and ends well...πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Ironman Bends; Breaks But Doesnt Rust

The Author keeps the storyline moving, weaving the previous books and the lives of the other Riders into a seamless Tapestry...then adds another thread so that the Reader is lured to follow.Cant wait to read Vince and Tor's stories....Good reading, keep the stories flowingπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Intense, Fighting Fit...

The Author keeps the narrative real...the storyline is tight, consistent, loose ends are tied in this story...Funny though, the invading Drug Runner isnt given a name or an identity, as if he is just a pawn needed to fulfill the plot line....Good read..πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Fight As You Might, Love Always Wins

The Author must either be a part of the subculture of Bikers and MMA or..she has great researching skills and information. She transported this Reader to the actual fight scenes, actually hear the noise of the crowd, feel the hits suffered by the fighters, smell the blood and taste the fear and excitement of all the participants. The dark side of the fight, flight and fucking relationship is exposed..Taken altogether, this book featuring Vik, Lysandra, Daniel and the Riders is intense, gripping, heartrending from the get go...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Repairs, Release ....Roar

The story line is believable...There is wickedness and depravity in the world..There is pain, hurt, bitterness but there is also healing, restoration and release..Broken peices can be glued together not to the original vessel but to something different, unique and special..Rage and Iris prove this but Wood and Tammie add realism to the mix.....Who would have thought that you could a situation that once brought pain andvmake into something that brings pleasure and healing to both parties...Good going Author you incorporate the stories so well..πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Modern Day Fairytale

Very artful handling of a modern day version of a fairytale...Complete with wicked witches (two), a handsome hero and a modern day rags to riches heroine...Love the inclusion of the media hype...Glad that the Author inculcated that in the story; makes it more believable in this time of the #metoo movement where every man is guilty until proven innocent...Great ending, loved itπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Heartwrenching Well Told Story

Well written..could not put it down until the story was finished, a real page turner..Author has a great understanding of PTSD; its effect on families..also of human nature, both good and bad..Would read another of the Author's books..πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Full of Rhetoric

Polarised, Racist...Black & White no Gray Areas...Life is not like that..I cant decide if the Author is writing a Parody or overstating the Story to get people to think but...
Not all black people think or behave the way the story is written..Is it a Caricature..Cause its surely not a good story..Question for the Author..Have you read "Atlas Shrugged" by Ayn Rand..You should if you havent already done so...Same one dimensional outlook on Life...SadπŸ™„πŸ˜
Story is thought provoking..somewhat repulsive though....

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