No, I'm not writing this review to be incredibly lazy with the star rating - I have legitimate reasons.
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Firstly the plot. I felt as if at some times it is shaky, such a when they were traveling to a new place. Sometimes it needed a little more explaining of the situation; what's in an author's mind doesn't always convey to a reader perfectly. Though, this being said, I found myself enjoying the whimsical setting of this book. It is also a very original plot, mostly because it doesn't follow the "Oh no people don't believe in the Holidays we have to save them!" line.
With the writing style, I found that it was pretty solid, just needing a few more descriptors. They can really bring out the scenes of your story! The writing style is not bad in the least - just needs a few more kinks to be worked out for it to be on the bestseller list.
There are a few grammar errors - minor ones, if you will - that popped up here and there. While sentence structure was not a problem most of the time, some words were misspelled. Try reading your work out loud, to yourself or someone else, and you'll probably catch these little errors.
Overall, I felt myself enjoying the story throughout, even though it may be made for a a younger age-group