jordandemark38

Just a sixteen year old that loves to write. You will usually see me writing survival, thriller, or a splash of both. Follow for more updates because I usually release one chapter a week, or more!

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Spectacular!

The first paragraph was very impressive creating an impressive hook for the readers, getting straight to the point about the storyline and who Jynx is. The best part about this story was by far the plot creating an interesting different world with good characters. The main character was cool although I wish there was more explanation on how he looked like. I saw a couple of grammar mistakes but the grammar still deserves five stars. The writing was amazing as well with very good word choices and an amazing explanation of how the world looks around them. With an amazing dystopian plot, good characters, spectacular descriptions of there surrounding, and with quite the interesting ending this book deserves more attention. Keep up the good work! This was a perfect story.

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Amazing!

Usually, I never read drama, but even this story got me hooked within the couple first chapters which is impressive. I love the way you describe the characters and their actions by using unique word choices. The other main thing I love about the novel is the dialogue which feels realistic and well done most of the time. Even though I like the characters they could do a bit more work but of course, the story is only four chapters in so that is just what I am going off of so far. I did not notice that many grammar mistakes so that is a plus as well. By far I love your writing style and descriptions of the characters the most bringing in some fantastic dialogue as well. Some improvements of the characters such as more back story would make this story an amazing read!

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