joshnakken

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Sylvia Scott

Your story was a different telling of a first person mystery, I liked that it was different. my only suggestions to you are, make up a character sheet to keep track of things like age and chronological order, then try using free software like Grammarly to check your story. other than that I thought it was a delightful story.

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