J.R. Soares

Pleasantly Surprised

I really like this story so far. The characters are fun and light-hearted. I love that this story includes main characters in their 40's. That's a refreshing change for a wolf novel. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Creative

This story is interesting and very creative. I enjoyed it. It needs a lot of punctuation help because it’s difficult to tell when someone is speaking. Many times the quotations are left out and then you realize they should be there because someone responds verbally out loud.

The imagery is good and paints a picture but is very basic. No frills descriptions and explanations. Moves very quickly.

Overall I love the story, just needs a bit of editing.

Great idea!

Excellent Writing

This isn't a typical wolf novel but it's amazing. This writer is professional level and the story is interesting from beginning to end.

I look forward to purchasing his other books on Amazon soon so that I can read more.

Incredible.

This novel is extremely interesting. The writing is top notch and I believe this book could be published and top the best seller charts.

It's not usually my type of book, but I'm so glad I started reading it. I'm hooked and can't wait to see what happens. It does a great job at hinting at possible secrets that you can only guess at and I wonder which will be true.

The creativity and inventiveness of the world really draws you in and it feels so real.

I've definitely become a fan of this author.

So interesting

This is very creative, unique and interesting.

There are a few mistakes where “I said” is used when it’s really someone else talking to the person telling the story. That’s really the only repeated mistake I see but it’s easy to tell who is really talking so after a bit of correction it won’t be an issue.

I can tell the author has a great imagination and told this story with a lot of passion. Slow down a little and take more time with explanations to give fuller visuals. We aren’t in your head so we need the details.

Great job!