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good character
I kind of like the characters, 😅maybe that's because they're from Japan. 😶But your characters sound really good, so I want to read more.
Read the story nowgood character
I kind of like the characters, 😅maybe that's because they're from Japan. 😶But your characters sound really good, so I want to read more.
Read the story now