justwrite25

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really good!

Great job Bree! It kept me interested until the very end. Is the second chapter up? I'm new to the site, and still trying to figure out the settings. Some of your phrasing was a little repetitive, but other than that, i couldn't spot any grammatical errors. I really enjoy your writing style too! I hope you publish more stories!

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