JW Fagan

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Strong World

You've created a strong world, one which seems very real and easy to picture. I think you had a good combination of description and character interaction to build this "place" and make it real. Nicely done!
It does have a Hunger Games feel to it, but not in a bad way.
Aside from the imagery and characters, the overall movement of the story flows very well. I didn't sense it getting too bogged down anywhere.
I enjoyed the work!

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