Kiera Gold

🌻English Major🌻Future Professor🌻Dog lover 🌻 Leo🌻

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Relatable

These poems hit you right in the chest. Each one is impactful and really makes you feel what the writer is feeling. Over all, amazing work!

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I’m a sucker for a witch story! And a cute holiday one nonetheless!

This is extremely well written. Maggie is very cute and quirky and I enjoy reading how she uses magic! You have done extensive research and it really shows. Your descriptions are phenomenal and I can vividly picture them (and in some cases taste them!) you’ve really done an incredible job!

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Love the view point swap

Really enjoyed the story! Loved how we not only got River’s prospective, but Grayson’s as well. It really was cool to watch each of them view one another. Also, I really liked the flashbacks to rivers life! Well done!

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Great poems!!

This is a very well written collection of poems. Each one blows me away, and the feelings evoked are strong ones. Well done!

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Amazing!

This story immediately draws you in. Lea is such a wonderfully strong, and intriguing character. The world of Alterdam is whimsical, magical, and everything you are looking for within the fantasy genre. Bravo to the author!

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Good work!

This is a very cool plot! I really like the characters and how well you fleshed them out! I also enjoyed the fact that it’s at MIT which is a school that doesn’t get much fiction (at least from what I’ve seen) my only critique: writing from a men’s perspective can be hard! But remember to use a little more emotion when describing things :) you don’t want him sounding robotic! He seems to be very analytical but I would like to see more charm from him! He sounds like a very handsome guy ;)

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