Kamille Rose 🐦

18 | I like to write about life; all things ugly, raw, real and romantic | I’m also on Wattpad @kamille-rosee (:

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Great potential 💜

I’m an absolute sucker for sweet, fluffy romance reads with humor and drama. This book gives you a little bit of it all, and I find myself closely relating with the MC. She reminds me a lot of myself; especially with her clumsiness. I bump into a wall at least twice a day!

Aside from little grammatical errors, some criticism I’ll give is to break up long paragraphs of dialogue with an action, because realistically, people don’t just spew words all in one go. I noticed this in the scene where Jimin is telling Y/N about his move to Seoul. Add in a pause or perhaps a fidget.

Another would be to separate lines of dialogues between two different characters and make their voices distinct, so the audience is always clear on who is speaking (:

Keep up the good work, Katelyn 💜

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Unique

The main reason I liked this collection of poems is because I’ve never read anything like it. It was such a lovely read and flowed effortlessly. I got lost in this little magical world you’ve created. For me it’s been hard to tap into my poetic side, so I just haven’t written in a while, but you have a knack for it.

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Good

I really like the ideas included in this collection. My favorite has to be the Private Tutor. However, the only thing that was a constant flag for me is the overuse of certain phrases like “fell onto” or “fell in” etc. As well as the “sensation to pee.” It tends to get stale.

Other than that, great work.

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