Great potential 💜
I’m an absolute sucker for sweet, fluffy romance reads with humor and drama. This book gives you a little bit of it all, and I find myself closely relating with the MC. She reminds me a lot of myself; especially with her clumsiness. I bump into a wall at least twice a day!
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Aside from little grammatical errors, some criticism I’ll give is to break up long paragraphs of dialogue with an action, because realistically, people don’t just spew words all in one go. I noticed this in the scene where Jimin is telling Y/N about his move to Seoul. Add in a pause or perhaps a fidget.
Another would be to separate lines of dialogues between two different characters and make their voices distinct, so the audience is always clear on who is speaking (:
Keep up the good work, Katelyn 💜