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Pretty Good

Decent short story you have here. The premise is pretty original, but mother scene is a bit cliche & there are some grammatical/spelling errors (from Emm, not the purposeful styling of Malinda). Has some nice imagery. It needs a little polish, but I enjoyed reading it & think with some development you have a good start on a novel. Cheers!

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