kapil chugh

Chandigarh

The hopes give me the hope of a great life. I teach computer science and love to write stories and my ideas. I want to keep doing the same and want to contribute my bit in this way for a better world.

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Great thoughts, limited by words

I truly enjoyed these sweet poems, The recipe of emotional pangs, complaints and sweet expectations of a lover is something you will love to relish again. My request to you is to use appropriate words and punctuation to pass on your message to your readers the way you want, not the way they may interpret. For example, in chapter 4, "your crazy lover of your first earning bracelet" should be written something like this, "crazy lover of your bracelet, from your first earning...". Similarly, we "extend" our hands, not "increase."

I hope you will take my suggestion in a positive light. Keep writing your lovely poems.

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Childhood Dreams

I felt like I just saw a lovely childhood dream in the middle age of my life! Thanks for taking me back to my early life. Though I wished to read more...

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