Kara

Amazing poetry

I loved these poems you made, I love how there short and sweet and super relatable. I read two of your words and bam I relate just like that! I’m really glad I read these you are quite talented and I am excited to see your other works!

Scandalous Lovers

I really like how you have chosen to base your story line on the 1800s. It’s quite unique and different from all the other books I have read. I believe this book is doing wonderful, the plot is interesting and I can’t wait to see how it ends. I’ve never really read a lesbian type story, but I think it’s brilliant so far. The details of the clothes they wore back then as well as there actions helped me understand what it was like for women and how they had certain duties back then. I can’t wait for the next update great job author!😊

Asylum

Ok I loved the mystery and suspense your giving off in your first introduction. I thought was terrifying the description of the brutal murder of the guard, but it kept me intrigued to find out who did it. Your descriptions gave little away making me want to see how our main character is going to handle them when she talks to each of them! I’m really enjoying this story so far, since I myself wrote a murder mystery I do love a good horror book every once and a while. I do hope you continue with this book, because I am very intrigued so far. Great job author!🤩😁

HILAROUS

I really enjoyed this authors work. The main character was fun and hilarious. Always having her own internal battles, as well as stirring up trouble with her friends. It’s always refreshing to come to a book that makes you want to laugh so hard that your actually crying! I loved this book a lot author, and I am intrigued as to how it continues!😋😋

Love it!!🤗🤗

I really enjoyed this book. The first chapter really draws you in as well as love and relationships forming are so heartwarming. Really great work author, the plot was all there, as well as the grammar was pretty good as well!
Well done!

YASSSS QUEEN

I really love this book. The details the author uses to describe everything are amazing, it feels like I was pulled into the scene. Though the details were not to overpowering as well, they did not stray to far from the plot which is awesome. You really balanced it out perfectly.
The story keeps us entertained as well as giving us some excitement. I really enjoyed Becks and Jacks dynamic, it is always fun to see flirtation in the air.
To sum it all up author really awesome job on it as well as good punctuation and grammar!😇😁

AMAZING!!!!

Very interesting plot, I do wish the chapters were longer but it’s ok. Every chapter brings me wanting more and more. It’s just so exciting and I want to find out what’s gonna happen. You delved right into the plot which I like, details are very important and grammar is pretty well in here. Good book author!

Poems are amazing!!

I really love the authors poems in this because it’s amazing!! It speaks of life experience and combines it with nature and other things pretty well. The details of this feeling that’s inside her is spilling out on every word! Of course here’s the nice criticism

Poems yes are can be shorter
But in books it’s about 1000-1500 words between there for every chapter. That’s usually the average for a chapter. You of course do not have to do that.

Also some people do this, it is usually a choice and different readers have a preference to this sort of thing. I for one like to add spaces after every paragraph to make my chapter look less intimidating and crowded.
But some other people like it all being squeezed in and everything, again it’s just the readers preference.

Hint hint if you space your paragraphs it makes the chapter look longer 😉

Bad Luck

It’s a great story, and it’s awesome how the author builds up the characters relationship! I hate the antagonist with my whole heart, but other then that she does keep things interesting in the story and that’s the only thing I applaud her for doing!!😡😡 anyways greats job author!!! There are some grammatical errors, but not many which is great keep writing!!

VERY INTRIGUING

This book is really goood!! I will definitely recommend this to people that love a little fantasy, and a headstrong girl! I love the protagonist in this story, she is so strong and brave! The plot of this story is very interesting and every chapter made me want to continue!

Falling in love again!

From the very first chapter the author has this smooth and hilarious banter going on between the two main characters of this book! This book makes me believe that there is a Gary out there in the world, which I really hope. He has this charm and cuteness described in the book that makes me fall head over heels with him. Chanti omg she is great I love her witty comebacks and fiery personality, I can always appreciate a strong female protagonist! Anyways I greatly enjoy this book a lot and I hope to see its success in the future!😄😄

SWEET

This story is nice if your a sweet romance like me. Those cute moments always made my heart warm for the characters. I really love the emotions in this story as well as the twists I did not expect like with the mother and father. I will not spoil it though tehe. It was a nice read and I’ll be sure to look for more!

The Queen and Her Knights

This book is amazing! The details and plot of this story would intrigue anyone to keep reading. Details are everything I feel for a story, it portrays how the author can use simple words and turn it into something powerful. Very great work and I will be waiting patiently for new updates!

YASSSSS

I like this story, I have never really read a lesbian story, but I do love the characters and the chemistry going on with them. They are so caring and sweet. Anyways love the use of names from vampire diaries Yass queen! I’m really enjoying the story so far grammar seems pretty good as well as the intentions in the paragraphs! Am waiting patiently for the next update!😋😋😋😊

Beautiful Story

This is such a beautiful short story. The authors details or extraordinary and her vocabulary is great. Her grammar is very well as well as the plot of the story is good. The way the author describes these characters and there emotion even actions just pulls your breathe away. The story is sad and sorrowful when the sister dies, and when at the end you put how true sister didn’t feel so alone when she heard her sister calling to her in the orchids that was my breaking point! It was amazing and I loved it!🥲🥲

Mesmerizing!🤗💯🤩

This is a sorrowful but beautiful poem spoken from real life experience. It has just the right emotional ness that makes you connect to the authors poem. The grammar is excellent, and the meaning in the poem is memorizing. Though this poem is emotional and sad it demands attention and wants to be heard. Good poem poet!💗💗 I alway do enjoy a good poem!🙂🙂☺️

AWESOME FUNNY CUTE REPEAT

I like this book, though I would like it if the chapters were a little longer! I like the main character she is always doing something funny or saying something that makes my day!🤗🤗 STILL HATE OLIVIA!! Good work author!!!

Best Book Eveeerer

Very intriguing book! If you read this book it will hook your from the start! Even though it may only be three chapters so far, it’s amazing so far! Her descriptions are spot on and her grammar is perfect! I just can’t wait for the next chapter already, your a really great author!😄😄

Beautiful Poem!💗

Love it!!! ❤️ it’s beautiful and thoughtful because we’re getting little details of your life through your fantastic words!!! The poem is great I love how you spaced it as well with the lines, noice grammar I might addd as well!! Good job dear I always do love a great poem every once and a while!😁😁 👍

Intriguing and awesome

Good book so far! It always kept me guessing if the character was good or bad. I like the story line and plot. I think whoever likes a steamy and romantic werewolves story, this is the book for them. Her grammar is mostly very well done, so cootos to you author.
Can’t wait to read more!!!

Amazing Story

This book is extremely good. There is a connection right on the spot with the two characters that make us love them immediately. Of course not just romance is in this book, but thriller. The characters both have a past that helps us understand them more. As well as them being threatened into separating from each other. It gets you teary eyed and sad but it is worth the read. I have to mention that this author has much better grammar then some people, and English isn’t even her first language, so cootos to the amazing author!!

Page Turner

I like this book a lot! It has lots of details which are very important in creating a bios Mary of what is happening in a story! Also it’s a page turner, making you want to read more and more as the book through in passionate and devastating news too you! I love it even though it is a few chapters long, it has so much potential in it! Good job author!

In The Dark

I like where this story is headed, even though it is only a couple chapters it is good. I like there chemistry together Ben and Eve. I like how you space your sentences so the chap r does not look so crowded. Keep up the good work, I always love a little romance in books!😋😋

Zena

I do like this book so far, I love the authors phrases she writes I find them hilarious! I do recommend this book to anyone who’s looking for a bit of action. Anyway keep it up writer ya doing great!