Karen

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Second chance

I loooove this story,please keep up.the good work

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Ok title

Very nice story keep ir
up

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No need for change

I like it,very nice

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Ok name

Great story

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Title is ok

Great story keep up the good work

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Title is ok

Love this story,ver nice

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I like the title

Lol i love this book.

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The title is ok

The book is ok

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I like the name

I love them all,short and spicy

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Name is ok

The story was way too long and mid way I lost interest,just get to the point and the love triangle was all over the place. Am sorry but just get to the point when writing,ok.

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I like the title,I don't think it needs to change

The plot is great but there are alot a correlation to be mad

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Confused mates

The cuss words are unnecessary and very irritating they are not necessary and just really irritating

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Special mate

Stop using the same words so often and pay attention to you grammer,but I love this story

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Perfect mates

I like the story,some words are most spelt but that can be easily corrected,I love the story,some things are repeated too often but u still love it,spice up the sex scenes and more emotion in the book,but i still love it.

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I like all the titles just fine.

I like all your stories,please contnue to keep them short and spicy

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Like the title

The sex is too similar and the words said in passion is too similar,change that up a little,but jeep up the good work

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