Karen S Seifert

A young reader and writer

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Missing an ending

I actually enjoyed reading this story very much.
It all played out very well, except for the ending. The last few chapters just felt weird.
And while I'm taking about the ending - there's none. I've read George R. R. Martin's novels, so I like cliffhangers just as much as any other person who's done that, but this one doesn't really add up. It feels like the author felt the need to write something more after the story was finished so far.
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The whole scene of trying to outrun the police seemed way too overdramatic and unnecessary. Just give her a speeding ticket and we're all good. There's no need to make her go into prison for over ten years after all you've already put her through - and different from all those previous forms of torture it doesn't drive the plot or adds to the story itself.

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Other than that it's a solid story I enjoyed reading.

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Always staying true to itself

I couldn't put this one down.
The broken characters evolving was an idea that intrigued me and I admire tge way they always stay true to themselves and their ambitions.
The ending was unusual but perfectly executed nonetheless. In fact it was probably the most realistic and perfect ending possible.
It would have been rather easy to get lost in those cliché stories we all know and sometimes love, but this book works even better with the way things turn out to be and there are no plot holes or absurd everything's forgiven moments to be found, it kept me on the edge til the very end and that's something I admire.

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In love

First things first: I'm a rereader and have already read this book when it was first published on Wattpad.
So the mere fact that I'm reading it again is probably enough to show that I really love this story. I know how hard it is to work out the background of such a story, the places, the timeline, languages, mythologies,...
It's - at least from my experience - frustrating to say the least. So to see how all of this works in this novel is wonderful. The characters stay true to themselves while they discover who they are and it's great to see two reincarnated lovers not falling in love at first sight for once. The two timelines work well together and the gods and people are able to surprise you even when you thought you'd figured it all out.
From the very beginning to the last words it's a book I can read over again and again because it doesn't get boring and the evolution of every party involved is a gift to every reader out there.
Read this book, you won't regret it.

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Refreshing

I'm a hopeless case when it comes to those werewolf stories where two males share one mate and I can honestly say that I can't recall how many of them I've read over the years - most of the ones available on Wattpad for sure.
But whereas most of them had a weird twins share one mate constellation, this one is different. The plot is original and while sometimes the plot might seem a bit rash and the protagonists might adapt to certain situations too soon, it's a refreshing story I really enjoy reading so far.
Every character faces his or her own obstacles and while there certainly are some predictable storylines it's still fun to read and doesn't get boring or starts being a pure connection of different cliches, as most of these stories do.
So to sum it up: It's a refreshing take on a tale told before, with a lot of originality and a wonderful style of writing. A clear recommendation!

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It's wonderful

Love this story!
I already did so on Wattpad and I still do, can't wait for the next update.
Also it's refreshing to see the characters work out their flaws and I rarely see such in depth studies as I do in this novel - keep it up and don't ever change your style of writing <3

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