katelynbarnes

Indiana, USA

Hello everyone! I'm Katelyn and I'm an 18-year-old aspiring author. My dream in life is to at least publish one of my manuscripts if I can ever finish one. I've been writing ever since I can remember!

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A Typical Love Story.. With a Twist

A very strong prologue introduces us to Chantel De Carvalho, a hotty, and Will Marias, a bigger man stuck in the background, and a character by the name of Georgiana.

"The Exit Plan" is a story told by Will himself, and tackles many sensitive topics. There is not much to go off of just yet, but the summary does help us to understand that the book will soon discuss such topics, and create a refreshing love story never seen before - such as covering the reaction of Will, and what goes through someones head when there's heartbreak instead of focusing strictly on the relationship itself.

The relationship between Will and the other characters, as well as how Will thinks about himself, seems very raw, realistic, believable, as well as relatable.

Among the good things, there was something that just bothered me a bit; there are some bits where there was no punctuation where there should've been, and some misspellings, as well as places that need to be reworded. I'm sure as the story goes on, it will be easier to follow the plot much better.

Overall, outstanding start so far!

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Very Refreshing Tale of Greek Gods and Goddesses

*There are soft spoilers for Chapters 1-6*

"Until Kingdom Come" is a wonderful story with an interesting and NEW plot for books based on Greek Gods and Goddesses! It's unlike I have ever seen before, and is very captivating - I personally don't think that gives this story justice!

Morgana Sallow is an intelligent, different, interesting, and extremely relatable character in every way possible. Her intelligence isn't overbearing, but honest instead.

The school feels very realistic. The peers and teachers make me feel like I'm right in school again, and I truly felt bad for Morgana until a little later into the story when there is a wonderful twist that the professors are all gods and goddesses themselves!

The relationship between the mother and Morgana feels extremely realistic.

When Morgana finally arrives at House of Desdemona, it feels too good to be true, and Morgana takes note of that near the end of Chapter 6. If the character feels what the reader feels, that's a wonderful connection in my book.

You executed a lot of these ideas extremely well. A very interesting read and I cannot wait to read more of this book!

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