The Kingdom of Archer Book I: Bloom
The Kingdom of Archer has such a good storyline. It could be a movie. The characters are realistic and the plot is excellent. Lyric having to choose between two soul-mates was interesting, especially when she thinks both choices are bad. Having had a life of terrible abuse from her father, it's hard for her to understand a man could have such love for her as Parker does.
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Having said that, I highly suggest you try out the program 'prowritingaid.com' to help correct the grammatical errors. After publishing my first and only novel, I found a ton of mistakes. With the use of this program, I learned a lot. I did the second edition of my book and believe it or not I got rid of 20,000 words and all the semi-colons. It reads so much better without losing sight of the plot. (My second edition comes out in Jan.)
It may take some time, but I recommend you do it. Try it one chapter at a time. I think you'll be pleased.