Kathleen Ballantine Watson

North Fort Myers

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Wild, wild, wild!

Jon gets a new chance at being young again and boy, does he take full advantage of it. William has quite the imagination. This story was like a roller coaster. Always something out of the ordinary happening. Never a dull moment. The grammar wasn't bad other than having too many commas with long sentences and some unnecessary capitalization. But that can be easily adjusted. Good job.

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Makes you stop and think

Sam, the main character, got the opportunity to really get to know his father in the true sense and it totally changed his thoughts about him. Good story line, I would like to see it as a movie. Makes me wish I had the opportunity to go back as an adult and meet my dad. The story was well thought out. The one thing that would make it more readable would be the use of 'Contractions.' Such as ( had not - hadn't) (did not - didn't) (she is - she's)

(would not - wouldn't) (they will - they'll) These would make the story flow. But good job all around!

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So real to life

What a fun story! And very well written. The characters are all very believable. Chess and Cora are thrown together in a competitive work situation. As two companies merge they both strive to get the CMO position. Chase lives with his dad, Willard and his teenage son, Robby. Cora lives with her mom, Georgia and her teenage daughter, Emma. Fate brings the two families together as a triple date. Need I say more? I highly recommend this exciting read.

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Very touching

I don't usually read poetry. But this was so moving. Flowed beautifully. Told such a good story. Cudos!

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Loved the ending

The whole time reading this I wondered how it would end. I won't give any spoilers, but I was happy with it! Great book for teens and YA, it took me back to my high school days. (long ago :) Good story idea.

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