So im sorry for writing this so late. Im travelling rn and havent had the time.
Read the story now
So here we go. I'm being really honest rn cuz im in love with ur writing style, im more of a story reader with long chapters and all so this was quite refreshing.
And u were right they were a bit vague, so abt that I really think that u can write a short story, like u have potential, if u arent yet comfortable with writing books u can write short stories say 3 to 4 chps which is not vague, with a beginning and an end.
Usually readers want a story which they can fully invest in with many chps so u can convert them into short stories.
And there are a few grammatical mistakes. U can proofread before posting ur story once to avoid any mistakes. :)