Katelyn Whiting

Jw.org💞💝 I love nature, am a big Phantom of the opera fan🎭, and love to write. I hope I get the chance to inspire you with my words!

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Great plot!

I think this story has a really great plot, just remember to cut up your story into more paragraphs (just a suggestion, you don't have to follow it) I think your story has a super interesting plot though!!! Wonderful job!

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This is the most beautiful thing I've ever read already

This book got me interested immediately. The plot, even though not very deep into details yet, is already intriguing. I can't wait to read more of this!! I can tell already that this is going to be an incredible story. :)

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Beautifully written

This story is written with such interesting descriptions; I look forward to reading more of your work! One thing that I did notice is that you go between past tense and present tense a lot; if you want constructive criticism that's what I've got for you. :) Otherwise, you've got an amazing storyline and very few errors with spelling and grammar!

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Yes!!!!

I am so excited to keep seeing where this story goes! So far you've pulled me in with what is happening to her father. I can't believe it; it's so good. Also, you picked a very relatable hook to many people because cancer effects so many. I honestly cannot wait to read more of this. I have faith you're going to make it good :)

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Very unique!

This title just caught my eye so I thought I'd take a look at it. Nice job! It's nice when things like music inspire you :)

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