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Unrivalled!

I am pleased to find and read through this one! I am a bit surprised, however, to find it leaves with a serious cliffhanger. I was under the impression it was complete. Is there more?

Distraction

That was intense! Interesting that Logan was letting his emotion lead him into 'dangerous' territory. I'm glad you had her slap him a good one! The least he could have done was ask her what she knew about her parents and her dad's business! He's in the doghouse now! Nicely done! ;)

Freaky!

This was the whole package; drama, adventure, relationships, growing up, love, family, betrayal, retribution, etc..... I am really looking forward to any of this author's works. The grammar was terrific, I found no spelling errors, and the flow of the scenes was fluid. Keep up the good work!

Saving Kinsley

There have been so many stories that I get invested in reading, and then they up and remove them to go to another app! How frustrating! I get the desire to get your work out there to a bigger audience or format, or whatever.

But us peon readers, also without a pence to our names, would like to see a story through once in a while! Thanks for what you have shared. I'm off to find another one that is completed on Inkitt.

Over the top!

Amazing development of characters, wolf and avian cultures. I like the depth this author put into the various layers of social mores within the 'bird' culture. The speedy inclusion/awarding of a position at court for the farmer was a neat twist. I like the way the wolves took in an alien to their lifestyle and gave her better memories. This was overall a wonderful read! I would look forward to anything you write!

Mystery solved!

This was dynamite from Chapter One!! I loved the progression of Sam and Rosalie's 'ship and her learning to live among her own kind again. The questions of what happened and who did it created just the right amount of intrigue and tension that kept me riveted. Mega kudos for a job well done! Can't wait to see what else you have written!

Destined!

This was a riveting story! The tension drew me in and I couldn't put it down till I finished it! I look forward to reading more of your offerings. Thank you for sharing your talent. Kudos!

Stolen Fate

I thoroughly enjoyed this compact, intense story! The few grammatical errors were easily overlooked as I devoured each scene. I do hope more backstory will be forthcoming in Xander's story. Keep writing. Thank you so much for sharing your talent!

Killian

This was definitely a delightful read! All I can say is please keep writing. If this was any indication of your skill, you have lots more to share. Thank you for posting this one. I hope to see more soon.

Why Me?

I do like. the storyline of this one,It has a lot of twists and good character development. I would suggest spending time working on the spelling and grammar to make it smoother to read. Examples:

-died change to dead.
-would change to want (as appropriate)
-try to keep dialog identified to the speaker by separating lines and using quotation marks, commas, etc.

Thanks for sharing your story ideas.

Assassination!!

You have killed this style of descriptive writing! That battle scene was vicious enough for me to look for splatter on my screen! Kudos! I'm a bit of a bloodthirsty vamp myself and love a bit of military action. I'm also loving the buildup for these to mates to connect,....finally. Li's "trainer" needs to get a dose of his own medicine, though, and I am dying of curiosity to know what had the King to pass out like that. Bring it on!

Odin's MC

How glad I am to have stumbled on this story! The cultural details and language translations are very much appreciated. The social structure of this club is intriguing and I am definitely looking forward to seeing how King Elias and his crew work out Nova's situation. Bring on more quickly, please?! Valgjord!

Mind over Matter

You are seriously messing with my head with all these revelations between Rujcharm and Na-liegh! Just wanted you to know how much I'm enjoying this one.

WolfGuise

Just wanted to let you know how much I appreciated this story! Its various good and bad attitudes of the characters, the tender moments, the challenges they faced, all gave a realistic story line that kept me riveted to each chapter. I offer sincere kudos for a job well done!

Alpha Prince

This is getting fun! This Lady Valerie has made a grave mistake in breaking into the royal quarters. Not smart to reveal your insecurities so soon after meeting the Prince's Mate. Kind of like dropping your cards before the game is called. This is a fun read!

Sapphire Queen

That was a fantastic way to bring them together! They got out what they needed to say, finally being real with each other. I'm glad to see them open up like that. You did an excellent job of having each of them facing their fears together. I'm getting used to your style of writing and am enjoying this one immensely!

Salvation

Just wanted to know how much I appreciated your lyrical style in this update. Switching from their mental anguish to the physical then to the emotional was masterful and thoroughly engaging all parts of my mind. Kudos!! Can't wait to see what you have in store for our couple next!

Blackmail Bride

I am thoroughly enjoying the buildup you are incorporating into this story. The detail could have bogged down the plot but instead seems to add tension and intensity. Kudos! I'm looking forward to more of this one.

Moon Child

I don't know if I can find adequate words to thank you for sharing this tale. I am majorly impressed with your depiction of the struggle that Dawn had to deal with from human to were, or changeling as you phrased here. The tension was intense, her growth amazing and the drama from her past and present was fantastic! While some parts were pretty dark, the development of all the characters was phenomenal. I offer my humble kudos for a job well done!

Bright Knight drama!

Oh the drama! You have nailed the tension between Lucas' desire to be an acceptable boyfriend for Alaine as well as a defender of her honor when Despicable Kurt waltzes in to stir up his own brand of trouble. I loved it! I'm looking forward to seeing Lucas' plan to bring down this . I do have to wonder what Angus has been up to; he's been pretty quiet lately. Bravo!

Royally Fantastic!

Hurrah! So glad to see how Artemis/Athena handled her former mate. He had every pain coming! I like how you had her strengths listed for this loser. And selling other weres to the hunters?! That has to be addressed in further details, please. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing it.

Blood Ties? Egads!!

I've just finished this story from beginning to end, unable to tear myself away!! This was dynamite! I'm amazed at your content detail and continuation of character development. There seemed to be a little confusion in the sentence flow when Jenna and Felix made their way to the werewolf compound with Deanna(?) tracking them. I am really looking forward to your sequel. Kudos!

Blood Wolf

Fabulous! Delightful! Fantastic! Intense! Now, get back here with an update.....or two! This one has me hungry for more.

Last Ch of Behind the Lines?

I did enjoy this story, but the last chapter had me a bit confused. Who was Amanda? Was she Renee? And did bleeding out on the field of challenge mean she died? How did she survive to bear twins after such a bout with Diggs? Too many questions at the end. Sorry. I get that Diggs completely lost it in front of the other Alphas. Did Kelly and Kevin die? Help!

Alpha rated!

Now this was a special story! I thoroughly enjoyed the twists and turns you gave to the characters. I hope you can continue to share your talents with us again.

Alpha's Captive

I'm not sure about the tech writing skills since I just found this story today. I do hope to see more of the angst between these two opposing mates. They both have some serious reasons to leave deep scars on the other but are leashed together by "The Bond". I am curious to see where the last scene goes. I also understand your frustration over the lack of comments. I am not very strong in parsing another's work or reviewing the creativity of a writer. I do however, adhere to the belief that each author is entitled to explore their own talent. To share that talent is a much-appreciated and courageous gift to us readers. Kudos for an intense well-thoughtout story!

Stolen

This is my kind of karma!! I can only hope she gets her guys on board with "The Plan". Ha! This villain seems to have forgotten that the female is the more deadly of the species. Just don't keep us waiting too long for the fireworks. I hope Magnus having quite the chuckle at his Luna's conversation with his kidnapper.

A Warrior's Love

Definitely going to watching this author's development. This story, while somewhat simplistic, seems to show serious promise in character development and scene set up. I like the build-up in Wyatt and Becky's relationship as well as the well-earned setdown he gave to her mom, Julie. I haven't seen any grammatical or spelling errors to mention. Well done! I'm eager to see where you take this one.

Rejection

Loved it! I was thoroughly engaged with the various points of view and the cliffhanger tensions you so skillfully depicted in each chapter. I can only hope you continue practicing your talent and sharing any stories you can create. Thanks! Kudos!

Lycan

This was incredible! I am curious to see where you Grant's courting agenda and Alex's fixation with Aurora. There are quite a few players that have an interest in Alex and Aurora's interactions.I would love to see more of this one.

Shadows Trilogy

I just finished what you have posted and was wondering when the next part of the trilogy was going to show up. I did feel there was a rushed feeling to this story. Could it be to keep it within a certain number of chapters? Or perhaps each third part was to be equal in length? Not sure but I am eager to see more of this one. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Lupus Paolo

This was terrific tension building. Now I'm dying to know what he's hiding that has him so scared. Thanks for the update! Bravo!

Breeder

This was definitely a different spin than I'm used to. Very good details. I look forward to seeing what you have in store next.

Speak

I have not stopped since beginning this story inspite of several interruptions/distractions. After reading through to the Epilogue, I realized I had to let you know I was completely drawn in to Scarlet's life along with Renee, Theo, et al. Thank you so much for sharing your talent. I look forward to seeing more of your creations. Bravo!

Silent Love

I will not be silent in expressing my views on this tale! From beginning to end, my attention was captured and held enthralled by the struggles of Evangeline, Lucas, and Venan(sic?). The vibrant setting of Camelot, the disdain between king Arthur and Queen Guinevere, the blossoming of passion twixt Lucas and Evangeline....I am left breathless!

You have a terrific command of this time period and it shows in your descriptive scenes between nobles, knights, commoners, and servants.

I definitely look forward to reading more of your stories.

Bound by Duty

While I am new to this forum, I am amazed at the different levels of skill posted. I am intrigued by this story and its premise. The author is disciplined in presenting the characters and their place within each scene. I understand this is a work in progress and will be expanding on the beginning chapters. I am enjoying the learning curve between the king and queen as they establish her reign and their positions as mates.

I find a deep growing excitement as I read each chapter and look forward to seeing more. I have to agree with another review that asks that more detail be given to the world in which we are exploring. The betrayal of the previous king, the years Danielle was missing from her pack at a young age and then returning, the deep-seated enmity of the stepmother towards her stepdaughter, all do well to draw the reader into this scenario. Please keep your pen sharp and continue adding to this one. I for one am thoroughly enjoying your creativity.