𝐊𝐞𝐞𝐟𝐞 𝐑.𝐃

Indonesia

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Love, Always & Forever

Writing the Royal Arcanum series is like a saudade feeling, feels like being surrounded by the loved ones.

The writing process gives me a lot of life lessons, especially about the things that I didn't know that I would find...

Eventually, we're all connected by passion, fate, and life patterns.

Love, always and forever. πŸ’™πŸ’Ž

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My First Comedy Romance Novel!

A lot of funny things happened in the book. I love it. As a writer, this story always surprises me, because, who knows in real life this idea could happen?

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Warm Story

When I read the synopsis, it's quiet interesting. The story about fantasy in otherworldly place out there and with a superpower the main character possess.

Let's see the writing style. The words used in the first chapter are mostly unique, which what makes this has a bonus point. That's good. Poetic is aesthetic. The story description has a lot of showing than telling. This can build a chemistry for readers to engage in your story. But if it is used too much, can make the story has a really slow pacing, which can make readers impatient to know what is actually around the corner.

Overall, it is interesting to read. Especially when talk about fire element, this story will warm the readers!!

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Interesting Magical story!!

The first thing I notice is the synopsis reminds me of the Winx Club vibe, if you are familiar with it. Haha. The TV series will be coming on Netflix. And when I glance at your book cover, yasss that's right something fairie and magical about the story.

Now, let's see the writing syle. I like how you have a clean writing style, which is on the point. But you may want to take a look at how you write a punctuation. It will be easier for readers to read when you put a period instead of a coma if the sentence is too long. You can break a long sentence in two or three sentences. See your first two paragprahs in the first chapter.

Overall, this is a pretty interesting reading for magical realism lovers!!!

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