Amy_M

Emotional roller-coaster ride!

It's a simple story yet the author has described emotions so, so beautifully. I could actually feel what the character(s) was feeling (with music in the bg, you'd need a tissue box). I binged the entire story and it was worth shedding a tear or two.
I'd love to read more work of the author.
P.S: Can I know your playlist while you were writing this? =3

Fantasic!

Horror, thriller, supernatural, crime, investigation.
This story is a perfect example of all of these genres. It was a thrilling ride and so very well done.
I absolutely loved the main theme of the story, the lesson the writer tried to give.
I'd be reading more of this author's work in the future.
All the best, Thanks ^^

Hits right in the feels!

To be honest, I'm not into poetry, and this was my second book on inkitt related to poetry that I gave a shot. Let me tell you, I don't regret it.
This one is sad, but so, so beautifully done. I binged it, paused only enough to wipe my tears for combine these words with the beautiful haunting orchestral track, you're done (its a mere coincidence that one on my playlist came on when I started this. I put it on loop).
I'll be looking forward to more work from the author.
Once again, WELL DONE!

Needs work

Drawbacks:
- The abrupt switching of the scenes & dialogues was hard to digest
- A little more detail on the characters and their background is required
- Grammar needs work

Pros:
- Captivating start
- The theme is unique