Keira Storm

I like to write and post my books for all the world to see!!

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Beautiful!!

I love your descriptions!! The way you describe Maia is stunning. I wish I had your writing skills because you are going to be an incredible author someday. Although I am not finished, I have sent your book to my library so I can read it whenever. Keep up the good work!! 🖤🖤

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Good Concept

I like your story so far! Make sure you correct your grammar mistakes!

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Interesting

Even though I am not finished reading your story, I can tell that you are a fantastic writer. The characters are real, the scenes are beautiful, and the dialogue is quite profound. Never stop writing.

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Beautiful first chapter!

I like your book so far! Please update soon!

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Nice First Chapter

Even though the story is short, I want to know what happens next.

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Sad but relevant

Your book reminds me of the Pirates of the Caribbean. On the one hand, it has some pure moments, but on the other, it doesn't shy away from tragedy—such as losing a friend or lover—during a war. You managed to take two separate concepts and blend them so well. Good job!

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Amazing Work So Far!!

I love reading your book!! It was like holding Percy Jackson with a mix of Chronicles of Narnia. 🖤🖤 Even though I am reading four chapters, I am surprised by how beautiful this book is!

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It's Nice!!

Though the book is pretty short, I enjoyed reading the first two chapters. It seems like the author mixed in horror and the supernatural into one suspenseful book!!

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10/10

I love this story!! You have written the book with beautiful imagery, personification, and depth. Even though the story seems short, I got to know these characters even more. I hope you update this book soon!!

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Good Work!!

I have read your work, and so far I love reading about Aurora! However, I cannot keep up with the perspectives between her and her troubled lover. Even though I am uncomfortable about the mature sex scenes, I am amazed by your use of imagery and Aurora's character development.

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Five Stars!!

I love the first chapter!! The author uses a lot of imagery and gritty details that made the book worthwhile!! I don't know very much about the protagonist, but I hope the author will update the book soon!!

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Incredible Story!!

So far, I am in love with this book!! It gave me an insight into Chinese culture as well as middle-age human trafficking. Even though I am on chapter three I wonder if Yuzhe will finally tells Mei (I am sorry if I can't remember her name) he loves her.

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Nice Start

Even though it is your first chapter, I am impressed by how much detail you put into it. I hope this book gets an update soon!! 🖤🖤

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Beautiful story

I like Destiny and Damien. So far, their POV has made the book more fun and intense to read. If Destiny were real, I hope she and I will be best friends! She is relatable, quirky, and uses her powers to help others. As for Damien, he is quite a mysterious character, but I know he has some good in him. :)

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It's really good!!

So far, I love the protagonist, imagery, and the challenges she must face. Even though the book has five chapters, I am hopeful that the girl has a happy ending.

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Incredible story!!

I am surprised that this book does not have any more comments and reviews! I love the imagery, character dynamics, and the struggle the protagonist is going through. Though it is an incredible book, it tackles very mature themes!

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Nice book so far!

You have an incredible story, but I do see some grammar mistakes. However, I like the plot and your characters are well written! I will try to read all the chapters and leave a few comments! 😝😄

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Incredible Story!

I love this story so far! Please update soon!!

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Fantastic Story!!

Even though I have read ten chapters, I am completely hooked by this writer's story!! If you are interested in psychological thrillers, this book is the one!!

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