Kelli Knight

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Insight into post high school

The characters seem very real. The author has created people that the reader can imagine truly exist. Kudos on bringing them to life. Integrating texting as a large part of conversation is also very real. It's how society communicates for the most part.
The storyline was slightly hard to follow in some spots. It's a nice account of girl meets boy and girl has typical post-high school issues, however the plot was a bit muddy. The style of the author's writing is much like a conversation and there probably needs to be more description and literary devices. The "vibration" interjections were a little confusing. The story needs quite a bit of editing to clean it up and tighten it.
While it was an enjoyable read, I gave the lower rating for the reasons stated. If the editing were a bit tighter, I'd have rated it higher.

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