Kema

Good plot idea

The story is intriguing but needs more development as it feels rushed. The grammar also needs work. I understand the author is not a native English speaker so a lot can be forgiven but the characters need more development.

Good story; mediocre writing.

It is an interesting storyline. The writing is kind of basic. I am gonna try to stick with it because the plot is interesting. Maybe it will be worth it.

So far, so good.

I would like to finish before I get a thorough review. There are some visual aspects I wish were described in more detail but I love the plot.