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Khushboo Singh
I love writing. It is a beautiful way to express one's thoughts.
Nice work!
The plot is exciting. I read first two chapters. The fantasy drama about a gaming world is intriguing. Some things definitely need improvement . Like the part where protagonist is visited by the strange creature.. if its a game.. many people might have landed confused in the mysterious gaming world. The reaction of creature seemed unanticipated. But there could be more to it. Overall it was a good read.
Read the story nowGreat job!
I love the plot, even though I am not quite familiar with D&D. The writing style is nice. I could feel the excitement of the characters for the game even in the first chapter. Technical skills could be improved upon. Rest is good.
Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Good luck!
