kidochoi

Business psychology student, enjoying Thriller/Psycho stories and I blame E. A. Poe for my obsession with exploring the depths of the human mind

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The Death Bridge

Nicely paced, strong characters, pretty well-done world-building. I like the setting, making the story take place in the woods/jungle is really immersive and the beasts are well developed as well.

Some punctuation errors here and there, but I've already left my comments on them :)

Well done, a lazy read!

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Super interesting!

Right from the beginning, the story pulls you in and keeps you, the characters work incredibly well, also with each other, and the premise is thought through. It's difficult to create a setting in which fantasy is taking place in the "real world", as it often creates plotholes or illogical decisions, but I did not find anything that struck me as odd.
Highly recommended if you're a fan of the paranormal, exciting, well-paced conflicts and interesting character developments.

The only teeny-tiny bit I'd criticize is the cover since it doesn't really catch my attention and I think it's not very eye-catching in general, but that's entirely subjective.

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