Kiera Morrison

Nicely done

The plot was brilliant and I wasn't expecting the Epilogue to be dark and evil at the end. However, the book is brilliant and I hope you make a second book to continue Ellie's story. It's books like these that we need to have a strong leading role.

Keep up the good work

The plot and the storyline is brilliant. I've read a few merman x human stories before but, when I started reading this dark fantasy version, this took me by surprise and I wasn't expecting Assan to be evil but then again, even the villainous characters have a soft spot somewhere. Keep up the good work and I'm sure a lot of people will love this book as well :)

Great book

It's a good book so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Brilliant

Firstly, I am loving the story so far.

Secondly, I love the relationship between Rosebud and Valdus it kinda reminds of me Beauty and the Beast in some ways except it's in the world of Werewolves and other supernatural species.

And finally, Mother Evanora is a hated character in my opinion because not only did she sheltered Rosebud and lie to her, she also poisoned everyone's minds to make them think Valdus is the bad guy when actually she's the one who's been pulling the strings.

Bottom line, the story is brilliant and I can't wait to read more chapters.

Might need a bit more work

It was great book to read. I loved the plot and the story as well. However, I wanted to know what happened to the human slaves after Elena and Colt found out they were mates. Did they get jealous or did Colt lift the law on slaves so they could get a better life?

Also, who betrayed the humans at the beginning of the story?

Overall, great book but might need one or two improvements

Loved it

I loved everything about the story.