A Riveting Tale
I love how this story managed to capture my attention from the very beginning. The way that it was written also painted a vivid picture in my mind as though I was seeing everything that was happening in real life.
The grammar is a little spotty in places but not bad for a rough draft. A couple places are a bit too descriptive but not unbearable.
Overall this a story that captures the attention of the reader from the beginning and holds it hostage until they unravel all the mysteries contained within. I can definitely say I would recommend this to others and may read it again.