Kim Appelgryn

Johannesburg

Assassin's Creed, Narnia, Lord of the Rings, A Song of Ice & Fire, Percy Jackson, Harry Potter, Eragon ... any fantasy story is better than reality. I'm creating my own and you are all invited!

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Legends Are Made

Oh yeah! This is the stuff of legend! I collected all the Assassin Creed novels and played the games, so I am a huge fan and your book was a page turner at EVERY SINGLE turn.
Thank you for sharing this with me!

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Absolutely Breathtaking!

I couldn't imagine a book with more mystery, suspense and never wanting it to end! If this book was in bookshops, I would purcgase many and distribute it to others, telling them to forgot "known" authors, because you have the knack to not only tell the story, but able to describe it in such a way that I hated it to end.

This is by far my favourite and I have already put it on Social Media for others to know there are excellent writers out there: like you. Not once was I bored. You kept the pace so well that I cannot express further that this book should be shared and published. You have touxhed me with this story, and I don't mention it lightly.

You have a gift. Use it. And if there are ever more to come, you have juat earned a new fan!

Well done! It's been an exciting and enticing piece of literature. You are the best! Keep it coming! Your attention to detail stands out incredibly. You have earned a new fan of your book. Do not stop. You have what it takes to become GREAT!

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Interesting

Not my kind of novel at all, but this kept me going right through. Very good and it well paced.

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Very compelling

This is normally not the kind of story I'd read, but I was rentranced. Well done!

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Very Moving ...

Just typical every day life! Why do we have to fall oit with misunderstsndings!? People need to be more open and honest with each other. I really liked your story. Some grammar errors but it doesn't take away to spive this story tells. Really a good read!

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Fantastic!

I justread the one series and I must say, WOW! These are normally not the books I would read, but it definately broadened my perspection in other genres. All in all, thank you for an amazing read!

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Dynamic!

I just have to say WOW! Thank you for such a mind blowing read. Ypu could give George R.R. Martin a run for his money!
All in all, well done!

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This read BLEW my mind!

I must say, for someone who isn't into these kind of books, I was spellbound by your book! It really gives you the usage of "thinking out the box" ... all in all, I think it was a fantastic read. Keep up your good work!

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If Ever There Was a Story for the Film, this is it!

I really enjoyed it and hated it when it came to an end!

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Excellent!

I love mafia stories and this one does not disappoint. Not a lot of grammar issues but be careful with puncuation as well.

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Excellent Plot Twist

I love stories like these. Old grudges, rebellious natures ... it is the stuff worthy of the attention of Hollywood!

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Mind Blowing!

I really enjoyed this book. Just when I thought I knew what was going to happen, WHAM! A curve ball came and took me for a loop (in a good way!) Keep up the good work!

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YES! YES! YES!

This is what I'm talking about! A book that captivates the mind and long after finished reading it, my mind still goes back to it. So far, my favourite!

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Hollywood Blockbuster

This is the kind of book that makes me want to read more and more Fantasy. I loved the pace and the characters were complex but so easy to associate yourself with. Well done!

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Unforgettable

Please keep it up! This is the kind of story that makes Hollywood beg you to create a blockbusyer hit! Well done and keep it up!

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