I couldn't imagine a book with more mystery, suspense and never wanting it to end! If this book was in bookshops, I would purcgase many and distribute it to others, telling them to forgot "known" authors, because you have the knack to not only tell the story, but able to describe it in such a way that I hated it to end.
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This is by far my favourite and I have already put it on Social Media for others to know there are excellent writers out there: like you. Not once was I bored. You kept the pace so well that I cannot express further that this book should be shared and published. You have touxhed me with this story, and I don't mention it lightly.
You have a gift. Use it. And if there are ever more to come, you have juat earned a new fan!
Well done! It's been an exciting and enticing piece of literature. You are the best! Keep it coming! Your attention to detail stands out incredibly. You have earned a new fan of your book. Do not stop. You have what it takes to become GREAT!