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Hello, when reading your chapter it sounded like more of a list of things. You say I don't have a dad, I don't know if this is because your dad is dead or he's just not in the picture anymore. Same with going to Rosemond public high school, I don't know if you just move into the area or if there is something else going there. I hope this helps with your writing.

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