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Writing Style
Grammar & Punctuation

Needs refining

Good overall ideas but there is no flow in the language giving a very staccato impression to the reader. A lot of telling rather than showing. But there is the heart of something good within and the ideas can continue to be drawn out. Overall reads like the skeleton of a good novel - the bones rather than the flesh.

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