kokonut518

Interesting...

This book has lots of description and it makes me feel as if I'm in the book with the characters. You've developed the characters well and it's clear that they have their own unique personalities. The story is engaging and I can't wait to read more :)

Wow

This story was amazing and had lots of emotion. The main character's voice really comes through. The only thing is maybe check over your grammar etc. Overall, It's a great story :)

Run

The way you tell the story really hooks me in. It's great and I love the mystery

got me hooked :)

This story is fast paced and you use a variety of engaging word choices to hook the audience in. I love the way you describe every scene and character. The characters have their unique personalities. This book is off to a great start

Beautiful

These poems are short but full of emotion. I really enjoyed reading these and I love your writing style

Magical

I was blown away by your amazing descriptions of every scene. You transition between the normal high school world and the fantasy world so smoothly :) You have a great writing style. I'm loving your story so far and it's definitely going in the right direction.

Action Packed

I love how Aisha/Lily isn't a damsel in distress and sorts things out on her own. I like where this story is going, you've really hooked me in :) The only thing is that you should check your grammar a little bit, then the book will be perfect!!