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Wow. This novel left me pondering for a bit after I finished it. Advay was a bit cynical but interesting and his thought process was logical, complex and well written. My favorite thing about this story is it’s descriptions. From the storm to Valencia’s paintings the imagery appeared in my mind with more force than usually and this blew me away.

It took me a bit to realize this was a homosexual story, just because the point of view was from Advay, we were in his mind and his sexuality wasn’t at the forefront of his thought processes which was refreshing. I feel like he would not have known some aspects of life after his death or other people’s intentions (ex. Valencia’s confession of killing someone) and so the ending seemed a bit unrealistic.

Overall, I enjoyed this short story in its complexity and originality and would enjoy ready more of this author’s work in the future.

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Girl in Pain

This is an interesting novel. What makes this one stand out from others is the writing style. Almost all of it appears to be from inside the MC’s mind, overthinking everything and lamenting how she blames herself for her family’s accident. Because it is written in this style, it may feel slow in the beginning and many may stop reading cause they become impatient with the pace of the story. I admire that the author chose to write in this difficult style for it isn’t for everyone but I like how this style makes the reader feel closer to the MC and understand her/him more.

Although the author’s writing style is interesting, I feel that the story itself, the plot, was rushed. By the second chapter, Oceania was giving away personal items and accepting physical contact from a practical stranger. With all that she has gone through it’s natural to think that she wouldn’t be that trusting with someone she just met and this makes their relationship feel rushed and a bit unrealistic in the beginning. I just couldn’t connect with there relationship that well until they opened up to each other.

I enjoy the plot of this story, of self-forgiveness and opening up to others. Both Oceania and Cole’s character development makes you root for them and puts a smile on your face. I’m glad I got the chance to read this story.

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Then you look at me

Wow, this is an amazing story so far. You have an awesome writing style: it’s clear, descriptive and detailed without being too wordy. You even throw a couple words in there that I haven’t seen before but are perfectly descriptive, like “concernment”. I don’t get bored and stay immersed in the story cause I can never predict what happens next.

The plot is great. It seems well thought out and not rushed. Often when I read novels about high school/teen angst, or some kind of abuse it seems rushed but this story has a really good pace and paints a clear picture without feeling cramped in details or forced emotion. I would say keep up this pace of the plot and don’t feel you have to rush or slow things down cause I believe you have a good thing going.

The chemistry between Rainey and Ansel is awesome. I’m always looking forward to the next time they are together and I like how Rainey is painted as this strong independent girl with a rough past that still holds some innocence whenever she is with Ansel. Plus he is a perfect compliment to her character. Smart and strong with some dark shadows that leaves some intrigue as to who he really is. I can’t wait to see more colors in his character.

I’m loving this story and look forward to reading it some more! Although it isn’t finished, I can see myself rereading it again just because I enjoy how you write. If you ever need someone to proofread or leave a review, don’t hesitate to ask me! :)

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Lost Home

This is a very powerful story and you have written it well. I thought some parts were rushed and others had room for development (ec: Lizzie working on rehab and Solomon’s presence in the family). Also there were a lot of typos that distracts from the flow of the story. I recommend having and editor to help with this.

Good story and I loved Morgan’s character development. I don’t know how closely it mirrors the burdens of those who have suffered like Morgan did, but I appreciate this possible insight and it make me want to help many of my friend who probably go through the same hardships in life. Thanks for that, but the ending left me unsatisfied. How come it seems like she just dies? How did she die? And what about Kasey’s wedding, her starting a family, or her possbly becoming a police officer for abuse victims? There is room to grow here and I felt the ending cut off this story’s potential.

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Legend of Wrath

Loved it! A refreshing take on a common type of paranormal story. I absolutely enjoyed both Legend of Wrath and Tale of Pride. Now I’m on my way to read Zena and Lukas’s story. And I can’t wait to read about Hope and Despair. Lovin’ all your stories! 😁

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Her Hometown Prince

Oh my goodness! This is one of the cutest and romantic stories I have ever read. The ending just put a BIG smile on my face and I hope I can find somebody like Seb for myself. Thank you for the lovely story!

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Devil vs Alpha (The Millenium Wolves 01)

I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ Oh my goodness, you are such a gem. This it the best story I’ve read in a while. The plot, the action, the romance, the drama, the sex, all of it was fantastic. Some of the grammar was off, but I knew what you were talking about and so it didn’t take away from the story too much. Don’t ever stop writing and if you ever need someone to proof read anything you write, message me. I love it and I would read it again. I look forward to more of your work!

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Mate Me (If You May) The Millenium Wolves

I loved the story. It was well thought out, there was great character development and beautiful descriptions. Sienna overreacted and over-analyzes many things and didn’t give Aiden much of a chance to explain himself. I also thought she was incredibly needy and not understanding of his position as Alpha. I feel like I wanted her to be more mature and show snippets of how she would be as alpha female. Also you may want to have someone proof read for many of the spelling and grammar mistakes. Towards the end, the mistakes almost made it harder on the flow of the story. I would like to know that beautiful woman’s story and Jocelyn’s. Thank you for the great story!

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