krushandkill

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Even better

The story keeps on getting better, with even the bad guys getting more explanations about why they are like that. Not so bad as they were supposed to be, after all.

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Nice

Amazing story, with a lot of things happening, with some questions getting appropriate answers and many new questions appearing.
I found myself sometimes lost between the different side stories that keep on appearing, maybe the transitions are two fast, it would be probably better to have the side stories in different chapters, instead of being, sometimes, only one or two paragraphs.

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Very good

Amazing plot, but ends in the worse possible way, to continue on another book! I hate this kind of cliffhangers!
Who is Karina? What is inside her, really? Is she Aisa reborned? Or she has a Great God inside of her? Or she is a normal girl, in a strange situation? What will happen to Mara and Azriel? Too many questions!!

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I am curious!

Now, that's an improvement in grammar, since the first story. Easier to read, with the dots in the right place. I hope Lumina fulfils her threat of burning the Empire. Is it wrong, rotting for the bad woman on this matter? And, who was that darkness woman knight who took Rory's sword and squeezed his neck? Continue this story, it's intriguing.

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Good story.

The story is very good, with some amazing plot twists. It needs some editing in some words. Too many wrongly placed virgules instead of dots, to end a sentence. I had to read a full paragraph more than once, to understand when a particular sentence ended.

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Amazing, in the lack of a better word

For me, it's a mix between Hunger Games and X-Men. A story about people with diferent abilities, fighting each other in a tournment for the amusement of normal people, seems like a good idea. Unless you are on the fighting side and find yourself in the need to kill others so that you don't die.
There's one or two mistakes, mainly when it's a "I" and it's written "is", but the descriptions are very well thought, and in more than one occasion I could picture myself in the midle of the crowd, watching the fights.

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I hate the MC!!!

I hate Xavier, I hate cliff hangers and I might hate the author because of this story. That said, next update, please! 😉

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