Lady of Spain

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Rogues Gambit

While there were a few grammatical errors, I loved the sharp dialog, and the quickness in unrolling the plot. The technical details were described matter of factly which I liked. Overall, I'd say, it was very enjoyable. I wished there was more though. It seemed to end too abruptly. And finally ...gotta love a smarkaleck in the pilot seat..

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Pure

While the writing and premise were good, I actually would have liked to see some dialogue, and a scene of the actual relationship between the narrator and Leo. I think it needed a little more tension as to the coming takeover. It reminded me of The Invasion of the Body Snatchers, minus the pods.

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An Early Bird's Can of Worms

Hilarious. I hope the poor guy's suit wasn't too wrinkled, or his scruff TOO scruffy. He'd better take a nap later on too, and hopefully, the boss won't catch him at it--napping I mean..Wake up and smell the coffee. Oops, he already smelled it.

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Give Me the Good News First

Being a MORMON (a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints), I had a few bones to pick with this story. First of all, I believe that we all have, in fact, a mother and a father in heaven. We are their children. A sexless being is a ludicrous idea. Secondly, If evolution was true, then why the hell are there still primates in the world? And last of all, how do you explain near death experiences? I have witnessed several miracles in my life that can not be explained in scientific terms. I know there are gods, our mother and our father. If nothing else, it is a comfort to know that. .Sorry for the rant, but I was offended by the premise of this story.

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